All Comments on 'X-Ray Vision Ch. 07: Outreach'

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Elaine_Mature about 1 year agoAuthor

The Nick slant was interesting to write. What do you think? More of this side of things?

tomtrah about 1 year ago

yes, open up your story, new dimensions ... i'm having a ball with this, wonderful

Aardie about 1 year ago

Great chapter. You managed to hit all the bases and even add a new one or two directions for the story.

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. Had an inspiration, wrote The Note Game in a three-day sprint. Now, back to that road trip story! New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what ...

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