All Comments on 'X-Rays of a Broken Heart'

Inventive, and at least it effectively stymied the “We can go to counseling and you can learn to get past my cheating” conversation.

Vivid sense of imagination combined with watching too many horror movies. Get in the running car!

Classic M&M. Great story!

Revenge has its ups and downs!

5

Well written as usual for this author. Clever plot, well developed with nice pacing. Great ending. Five stars.

As usual very good.

Thanks moreandmore

Most of the time I'm not a fan of the two bite stories, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Love the sense of humor. Five stars man.

This was great, physical scars fade, psychological scars are forever or if you're under 25 "EmOtIoNaL DaMAgE".

Very creative and quite a twist on what "normal" Loving Wife stories follow. Many thanks for sharing your work. Cheers.

What a fun romp! Five stars for a different BTB. Okay, it follows the telltale heart pattern but presented in a unique way. Kudos!

Always original, always great. 5 stars! And happy Halloween.

Great story!

"I've never seen Ariel again. "

Ingenious way to get rid of a wife without all the "I'm sorry, it meant nothing....it was only sex" self serving and self pitying excuses and mandatory counseling sessions and divorce delaying tactics. At least he knows she'll never show up trying to get forgiveness and a second chance.

Now that was different…and scary! With shorter stories, people often clamor for more and more (couldn’t help myself), but this one was the perfect length. Bravo!

Excellent!

A deliciously elaborate revenge plot. Like watching a domino construction painstakingly erected and in the blink of an eye spectacularly collapsed. Touché! Thanks very much.

Predictable but a fresh twist on an old trope. The story moved a little too quickly, reducing my ability to really empathize with the MC. 4*

A heart will still beat outside the body for a minute or two

Great Halloween Story, just loved it.

Scores 5:5

Lmao. Great read . Very cleverly done . Nice Oct story. Would be great to do a fright night cheating wife story with BTB in it

Excellent! A fresh, well executed story! Thanks for sharing!

Nicely done way to get rid of the cheating wife

That was fun! A great Halloween story and the chase scene is well described. I got caught up in it completely!

The lead up to make the plot device work took too long…but when tne “reveal” took place, it DID work.

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Deducted a point for not providing ANY hint for why wifey strayed. Having her just disappear was a bit mean to tne readers. But then…this WAS a short one.

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3 ***

Freakin' AWESOME

Fantuckingfastic!!!

Clever. D

Great Story..

HOLY S#!+ Another shining(?!) example of your masterful and unique creativity. PLEASE keep them coming, M&M

Pretty original and well written.

I liked it. 5 BIG ONES!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

5* -- great short story, no need for more!

Darn good BTB!

Effective, thank you for posting it.

I'm awarding extra points for protagonist style and effort on this one.

To do these movies I have to pay actors and actresses. its male and female actors now

Good entry for the competition.

that was PHENONMENAL!

Great way to BURN the bitch! 5 stars

Different, but in a very good way. Thanks

A bit above average and very creative. Intense writing and flowed well. I enjoyed reading this.

I don't believe I have ever read a better shorty. I not into all the blood and guts revenge for cheating. A BTB is always a good way to end everything. This story was a unique way to let everyone know what was going on without blowing it a head of time. Oh, but she probably did that too. 😂

The movie set up was great for Halloween. This one earned all ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

Very original and well done story! Five stars

A self-deleting cheater. AND high art, in the same package!! 5/5!!

Liked it, but he could have countersued for adultery.

Great technique and revenge. Maybe someday you'll get around to writing about the people? I find them more interesting than sound affects and video techniques. I suspect Ariel found real people more interesting too, than the guy wrapped up in his video technique and sound affects. At least Ariel knows what the real thing feels like, and wanted more. Maybe her and her eventually divorced sister will shack up together. What have they got to lose? Thanks for the effort.

Very good!

Great story

very imaginative

FANTASTIC and extremely funny

I tried to stop reading but it kept me entertained

Once in a while you have a good story. This is good enough for one page.

Almost perfect, 5 stars!

Wow and sad also.

Very clever! Thanks!

Very different story.

Thanks for writing it for me/us

Keep writing.

Good one page story 4*

Very good and humorous except to a spouse or two. I imagine it could start some people thinking his little movie were just a prelude of things to come.............................5stars

5

Very enjoyable. I always hate it when a character allows a betrayal to ruin something, in this case, making the MC bitter. Thanks for the great story! 5*

5 stars. Lego_Patricia_Nostrils got it right this time. A fun story. Thanks for posting.

Love it, M&M! Great story!

Short , but if it was any longer I'd be moaning about unnecessary waffle .

Sometimes you just have to take it as it is and applaud .

Solid 5 * .

Thanks for the read .

"She filed for divorce on the grounds of mental cruelty. Me?!? Mental cruelty? Come on, get real. " Too bad it was she ran away never to be seen around town again and he filed for devorice 12 months later for abandoning the marriage.

Unique, original, fascinating, humorous, well written, good set up, concise,. You’ll enjoy it too!

I normally do not like one page stories but you managed to write a good one this time.. 5 stars

Well told story, 5stars

I gave it 5 stars mainly for the Yes reference. ;)

Haaaa , thats one way to rid yourself of a slag

5 * for unique and gripping short tale.

I bet the 5 that left wished they'd stuck around!

Thanks for writing

Quite imaginative

I think it would have worked better, if he handed her the divorce papers in front of the extended family.

Well done . Solid 5 *

I think it's your best piece of work for sometime .

DK

Alabi or not. A judge would take one look at this man's movie and recent past, especially something he released to the public and through the book at him. Courts and prosecutors are corrupt not stupid. 😂

Aaaaaaawsome. 5*

"Mental ctuelty", Cheats entitlement to kid gloves treatment disrespecte. She'll find a will g Jürgen, though.

To mr anonymouse (dont worry im anonymouse too, signing off as rk) who wrote the following;;;;;Courts and prosecutors are corrupt not stupid;;;;; wrong, they are both stupid and corrupt, sometimes at the same time. I dont know which they are most in, ie are they more stupid than corrupt or more corrupt than stupid? good question i expect that many are 80% corrupt while the rest are 80% stupid, leaving barely anyone in the judicial& law enforcement branches moral, ethical and somewhat intelligent, rational and sane. rk

Thanks to M&M for a great shortie.

Interesting contrast between the treatment of the male perpetrator and the wife; one gets physically maimed, the other is forced (?) to file for divorce. Author's choice, of course, just wondering...

I got a chuckle out of the comment that pointed out the MC had opened himself to a counter suit for adultery :) Seriously?

Sorry I missed this story earlier, but still quite enjoyable!

Keep 'em comin'!

Very clever story. A salutary tale of deceit lies and consequences. BardnotBard

Not bad.

Very good, just so we’ll set up.