All Comments on 'XAd, Inc Pt. 04'

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Fantasy LoverFantasy Loverover 19 years ago
Next Installment

Great story, when do we get Catlin's next adventure. Surely you have some more wonderful ideas for an adventure.

FL

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wow!

As always your stories have just the right mix of senuality, bondage, and down right dirty sex. Keep them coming (pun intended).

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
MORE?

I am just waiting for more installments. I can't wait to read about new adventures!

Rad'lRad'labout 19 years ago
Wonderful story

A wonderful mix of everything BDSM should contain. A real adventure. Looking forward to the next story!

AmberslutAmberslutabout 19 years ago
My gods that was wonderful

I do hope you will continue the series. What fun! Makes one wish she could be Caitlyn :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
OutStanding!

This is such a wonderful story all the way through. I so enjoyed reading all of it. I wish that there really were places like what you write about. Keep up the good work.

VanessaCarolynVanessaCarolynabout 18 years ago
HOLY...

... I am so jealous! How in the world did you manage to develope an entire portfolio of "H" stories? I'm breathless and quivering just from reading XAd entirely in one sitting. I used to joke at work that I would teach anyone the true meaning of class dismissed... but I've just been schooled. Kudos!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

you should so write another one. I loved it and can not wait to see what she goes through next. i think i might even be jealous of her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I AM SO HORNY AFTER READING THAT

I SO WANT TO BE CAITLIN RIGHT NOW I READ THE WHOLE SAGA IN ONE SITTING AND AM WET WITH ANTICIPATION OF THE NEXT STORY!!!!!!

hardcore_gingerhardcore_gingeralmost 14 years ago
Omy!

That was amazing, I absolutely LOVED it! If there were places like that in reality, WHERE DO I SIGN UP?! Keep Catlin's story comming! AMAZING!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
As good as it gets

This was one of the best ever. If there are places like this please advise how a girl signs up. Please continue on with her other adventures.

cressindracressindraover 13 years ago
*shiver

Sweet stars above! PLEASE keep writing. This has been without a doubt one of the HOTTEST tales I have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

This entire series was fantastic! Thank you for sharing withthe rest of us!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Economics of an adventure

There were eight paying customers so the total income was aproximately $160,000. The four slaves were paid about $3,000 each, although a portion of the $500 recruitment bonus and the $1,000 prize need to be considered as direct costs. There were another 4 entertainers, and an unspecified number of cooks, servers, maids, etc and the capital cost or implicit rental cost for the facilities may be substantial. Also direct costs are transportation to and from the event, by air charter. Food, drink including what appears to be relatively expensive alcoholic beverages, clothing and costumes for all participants, perhaps these might be reuseable after laundry. Sheets, pool heating and maintenance (draining and refilling costs depend on local water and fuel pricing.) Various whips and clamps, enema supplies, buttplugs, croquet supplies and a wide variety of torture funiture. I suspect the margins on this business are not high after the expenses are paid or accrued. In part it depends on the cost of facilities, if owned or rented, local taxes, etc. There may be some bribes to pay, depending on the location and jurisdiction, so the authorities do not react with "Shock" if they are or become aware of the unconventional events engaged in at the manor.

Overhead for the recuitment of new employee participants may or may not be a significant item. Internet accounts are relatively inexpensive, but identifying who to consider as a recruit may or may not impact expenses. Certainly the attention of the CEO and several expensive restaurant meals raise the costs. Depending on how many weeklong events a new employee will take part in, and only one had been on four trips before, the allocated recruitment cost may be significant. Much more than one adventure a month would be a strain on the most masochistic employee. Perhaps each is an independent contractor, there is no indication of tax witholding or workers compensation. The IRS may be looking for social security taxes as well as income tax.

My initial take on the economics of this firm is a prediction that it is likely going out of business or will be looking for adventures less expensive to put on, or that cost its customers more, or have more paying customers per adventure. This does not have the economies of scale of a cruise ship, and cruise ships hire from countries with very low wages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Anybody up to write more like this?

Top shelf! Far too rare to see a well written BDSM fantasy that acknowledges SSC/RACK and is not just degrading torture porn. Not everyone's fantasies are dark and seathing. Got enough dark and seathing in the real world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Excellent story. Read it here a few years ago and was happy to find it back. After rereading, I have to say, this is and remains one of my favorites here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Hot series! I should have been asleep a hour ago but had to read this. And stop a few times because I was wet...I loved the whipping (tit and pussy especially) and thanks for including the hot strap on fucking. Now I must do something (again!) about my soaked underwear.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Not enough superlatives for this story. Simply extraordinary -- scorching hot, erotic, kinky!

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