All Comments on 'Xavier's Teachers - The Handmaiden Pt. 04'

You write so well. Painting vivid pictures with the words. Loved reading this whole series. Keep it going if you will.

You seem to think you are an intellectual with your usage of ridiculous words and phrases. This chapter was WAAAAY to long, and a waste of my time. 2 Stars only.

This fourth chapter in the story is the best yet, and never drags for a moment from the first line to the last. As the excellent plot further advances the story here, it is in exactly the right proportion to the wonderfully written love scenes. The whole atmosphere is one of romantic love rather than erotic couplings, and makes for a great reading experience.

Mate don't pay heed to the negative comment. You're one helluva writer and this ch 4 is the best story you've written yet. Waiting for much more from this series. Keep up the good work

marvelous romantic story; one of the best!