All Comments on 'Xia Lin's Gambling Woes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
you are one of the best on the site

love your stories...your biggest fan.. waiting for my story to come up as well ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
welcome back!

Keep writing. Great stuff.

CallMeBigMike69CallMeBigMike69over 7 years ago
great story line but...

I liked your story line and specially the fact that she did not all the sudden did she find that she enjoyed being taken by force. Also when her friend came into the house and took $2,000 dollars to be used had me hard as hell.

What I missed was more detail about the rapes as they were happening. I need to have more about how she was feeling as they called her names. More about how she felt the pain of a dick being pushed into her ass, cunt and mouth.

That said I'm going to look for more of your stories. Thank you I hope you keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Would love to read more about Xia Lin .

warner34warner34over 1 year ago

Great story. Love that she’s asian.

NicoDevianteNicoDeviante6 months ago

Great story. Raping the anal virginity of 30 something denial bitch is a huge turn on!

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