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Feldwebel1945Feldwebel1945almost 3 years ago

Brilliant story, would love to see a follow up to this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Today I have to tell you this again. You've gone a bit too far in the third page. I've liked better the first and second. The setting was good and allowed you to go in many different directions. Glad to see you writing again, waiting for the next one. ;)

-Onkana

LizInTroubleLizInTroublealmost 3 years ago

Each to their own, Onkana - I loved it.

sammy_808sammy_808almost 3 years ago

i really loved the beginning, as a lot of the mental stuff Chara was going through are things i've dealt with as well (luckily without the abuse). i love the idea of being able to just be free to be yourself, and having friends that will help and support you as you do that. i think for this magazine, and these friends, i'd also be happy to be the office pet. :)

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For those wondering why I take so long to write new stories, the document I keep my abandoned stories in is now up to 101,000 words. That is longer than The Hobbit, Pride and Prejudice, or To Kill A Mockingbird. However, my published works come to 745,700 words, which means m...