All Comments on 'Xpedition'

I'm going to be honest: the sexual elements in the X-stories is feeling increasingly tacked-on. I think I'd prefer it if you dropped the sexual elements altogether to focus more on the sci-fi elements, and posted them in the non-erotic category.

Engaging and well written. I love your other work, and though it seems other commentators are harsh, I'm looking forward to any further stories you write in this series.