All Comments on 'Yachting Woman Ch. 01'

One of the better stories I've read. You have a languid, casual way of describing things. The story itself felt as leisurely as a boat ride.

That being said, some areas need tightening -- particularly the descriptions of Walter on "the boat," scrubbing "the boat," eating lunch "on the boat." Catch my drift? Too many "boats" in a couple of paragraphs.

*****That was a HOT read. So glad there is more to come. Thanks for sharing.