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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Impressed

I enjoyed this very much and was impessed with the English slang.Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great addition!

Who is Rebecca?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wonderful

... But who is Rebecca?

more.pleasemore.pleaseabout 6 years ago
Great writing. Get someone to edit

I really enjoyed these stories and hope you write more. I did find the errors pretty distracting. "Rebecca" as mentioned before, and changing to first person and then back. ("me" then "him) Please get someone to edit your story(ies) for you.

And definitely keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Ohh we’re a wonderful read. I couldn’t wait to scroll down

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Who the hell is Rebecca?

Great story but it get’s ruined by a mistake. Walter was screwing Lanette’s ass not someone named Rebecca. Perhap’s Victor should proof read his work.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****Damn that was one HOT AZZ STORY!!!!!!! Great job of *sextelling* of a sex story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Who. Ares about Rebexxa. It was very nice read.

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