All Comments on 'Yakima Ch. 05-06'

Love the Story. so far can see Gordon Winters getting sacked at his job. and Not Marrying Reese. leaving her struggling trying to find work and keep her house. or loosing custody of the kids to Hubby.

i lke where this is going

loving it

How much is ha paying his lawyer that it will take him a year to pay it off

Don't care if it's and old story. This is a dandy. 5 stars

This is the fantasy of all men... Coaster comes up with some really interesting women.

I am worried that his wife will still need child support in the future.

Great characterizations, especially how Ali continually pronounces Graham's name as "Grime." It's little things like that which give a character life. That was clever of you, it endears her to the reader - and brings a smile. Well done, this is an enjoyable story to read. Thanks for posting. 5 stars.

I can't tell you how refreshing it is to read a story where the woman isn't described along the lines of "...5'3", 36-DD, and long legs leading to a freshly shaved...."

Thank you for your thoughtful character descriptions, and a lovely story.

Grime indeed 😃😃😃. As Ali is British originally she might have used blinkers instead of blinders. Well adjusted characters for once, none of the BTB or RAAC.