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Click hereSide By Side Steak restaurant is introduced in the 'Wealth' series.
Polly Chastaine is a character associated with Coutre & Associates Law Firm in a few stories. In 'Life Anew' in Transgender/Crossdressers, she is Nicole Banks's paralegal. Well, obviously, in this story, she's finally become an attorney.
Heidi Moek, the bank manager of First Union Bank is a character first introduced in 'On Channel 12' in Loving Wives.
Jamie Timms, formerly Jamie Norman is a character in 'Beauty Of Snow' in the Transgender/crossdressers category. Her deceased husband would be Aaron Timms from the same story.
David James, Billy Hunt, Leslie Davis, and Stephanie and Gabrielle James are all characters from 'Each Day' in Loving Wives. Because Stephanie refuses to accept the divorce as final, she continues to identify herself as Stephanie Hunt, Billy's wife.
The House Of Mei restaurant is from 'House Of Mei' series in Interracial Love category.
The Atwell School Of Divinity was first introduced in the 'Just A Nice Boy' series in Incest/Taboo category. The origins of the school, as well as the towns names of Martinelli, Idaho and Bergeron, Idaho is explored more fully in 'School Of Divinity' in the Romance category.
How did Amber find Kaileen? The opening of a Daughters Steaks restaurant in Bergeron, Idaho was the clue Amber needed. Why didn't she find Kaileen in Colfax, Missouri? Remember, Kaileen did not open a The Nasty Pig restaurant in the greater DeGarde area; there's already a plethora of good barbeque restaurants and a few great barbeque restaurants in and around DeGarde, Louisiana. Kaileen did not open a Daughters Steaks restaurant in the Colfax, Missouri area. Amber would not have known to look for any new The Nasty Pig restaurants.
And that's it. A tale of a girl's journey in life, trying to find something that money can't buy, but that could freely be given, even by someone as selfish and self-centered as Amber Goodwin Truesdale Gerrard.
Have a swell day. And some of you? Have a swollen day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoDear Author, I am an 80 year old man and my sex life is pretty well, nonexistent. I live on dreams of my younger days.. It was a very enjoyable, read and well written. Thank you so very much.
DL Angel, Owosso, Michigan
Purplefizz9 months agoJust got around to reading this story again - which I love, mostly for the feel of place the speech patterns give it. I appreciate your leaving it here for us to read JimBob44.
I’ve also read a few of the newer comments, does Anon actually read his own grammatical vomit? Complaining about name spelling? Oh and fwiw capital “E” on english next time.
Does ds0402 actually believe that education changes your accent and phrasing? Maybe if you’re a pretentious preppy or if a refined accent is either a job requirement or makes you feel as if you’ve outrun your humble beginnings it might well do, however the point was that Kaileen was a “back woods redneck” and until her win had been economically trapped in the lowest possible echelon of society, the education and qualifications would do nothing to change that, neither would working at the sharp end in restaurants, a person has to want to change to actually effect a change on the way they speak, Kaileen was more than happy as she was. As someone bemoaning the dialect used and wanting “English” I’d suggest using capitals on Summa Cum Lauda and the correct English spelling of dialogue. We can all pick faults in things, I’d really suggest you put your own language use in order if you do next time.
Anonymousabout 1 year agorachael??? digusting misspelling of a perfectly good name. off of????? not english!
one star. and, waaaay too long.
ds0402over 1 year agoPretty decent story line and character development. The sexual content was very good and detailed. My biggest problem with the author here is the dialog. The central character Kaileen Whithers is supposedly a college masters graduate with summa cum laude honors but she speaks like an uneducated backwoods redneck. So do most of the other characters. It makes no sense. Kaileen is clearly advanced just based on her business acuity and self made wealth. She should articulate in clear, well spoken English. Perhaps a version edit someday. Otherwise, very good.
Anonymousover 1 year agoRobert A. Heinlein would approve of this story.
An "A" for merit and an "A" for quality.
