All Comments on 'Year One Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent

Keep going and keep writing. Create more stories of matriarchal world and soon our dreams would come true

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Really enjoying the gradual erosion of the rights of men in this female led society. The development of the main characters is nicely paced and the wider political threads provide great scope for inevitable conflict and exciting sub plots. Looking forward to reading more of your well thought out story.

PavitraPavitraabout 4 years ago
Absolutely Brilliant

Its an amazing story. The best femdom future story I have read. Two of the unique points I loved are:

1. Sponsorship Programme

2. Male Chastity Programme

Please continue. I can't wait to know if the narrator would be sponsored by Lucy or would come under Government's sponsorship scheme.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great Story

Great build up of characters with lots of directions to go. Love the curfue and sponsorship idea. Mandatory male chastity seems like a natural progression of Women in power. Very realistic and fun to dream about. Keep up the good work!

freddiecleggfreddiecleggabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks to all that have commented so far. Feedback is much appreciated and helps me plan future stories. Part 4 is now up and part 5 will follow soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i have a question regarding these stories...what's preventing the men, who have to stay at home and cook, from heating up a bunch of frying oil and throwing it their respective 'sponsor's' faces? The females in this story are so hateful and nasty.....be burned might help with their demeanor a little bit

freddiecleggfreddiecleggabout 2 years agoAuthor

All the same things that stopped women from rebelling against male oppression and still does in so many societies; inertia, fear of change, lack of any organisation, fear of the consequences......

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