All Comments on 'Year One Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Hilarious but then again a little worrying as well. Someone really ought to try to make a TV series on it. Looking forward too the next episode....

dyetieddyetiedabout 4 years ago
Great Story

Very enjoyable and nicely written. Lots of potential twists and turns to the plot, especially the male resistance angle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wonderful

Please continue the good work. Expecting legalised slavery by the New Order soon and waiting to see who the protagonist gets owned by

freddiecleggfreddiecleggabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback folks. It is much appreciated.

Part 5 should be coming through this week sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Waiting

Yo. Then waiting for part 5 eagerly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
ALL HAIL THE NEW ORDER!

Super hot and very well written. Looking forward to reading parts 5 and 6.

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