All Comments on 'Yearning Hearts Ch. 01.1'

I didn't want it to end....the chapter is too short... ..

Please have someone edit this, or at least proofread it yourself. Your first sentence is a run-on that needs at least a few commas. My inner English teacher is cringing.

It's good but the chapters r too short. Pls upload more soon cause the cliffs r mostlykilling the 'mood' here.

I thought it was Johnathan and Thomas? Very confused.

it's his middle name. Thomas is the only one who calls him by it. It's explained in the first chapter.

SOME PEOPLE ARE AS THICK AS TWO SHORT PLANKS ,

I wanted to continue...it seemed interesting. But it was too confusing. I couldn't figure out who was thinking what. So, I give up. Sorry.