All Comments on 'Yeen! Queen!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow character development

I'm not a person with an account but this deserves a Favorite. Usually the setup is blah but getting to know this band was a GEM! Not to mention the rest was bloody hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The real fun ending would be...

Ash and Domenic wake up as hyenas in their dilapidated room and have to build all this fame and fortune from scratch, with this memory as a guide to their goal. The rest of the band remember them being hyenas from the first grade.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love how this story also incorporated body horror and fantastic character development . I started to get to know the characters and care about how they felt and Thought about each other . Plus all the stuff about A woman with a Pseudo hyena penis , who Takes pleasure in showing it off was pretty hot

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