by BigMadStork
Would love for Kim and Beverly to fuck one of the brothers together and for that brother to become closer with Ben, Beverly and Kim.
A bakery is a place. It is not a piece of food. baked goods, pastries/pastry, cookies, pies, cakes. You cannot eat a bakery.
I'm a big fan of your work and especially like that you come up with ending that generally the up any loose ends.
Great story! Loved the characters and the story line. Thanks for your time and imagination.
It seemed to me that this story was not over. Yes, there is an epilogue. But that's because the author didn't know what to write next and rushed to publish the story.
Why is only Kim pregnant?
Abby seemed desperate to get pregnant. And she doesn't have a lot of time. She's already 35 at the beginning of the story. Her peers have kids that are graduating high school. Tina was 32, too.
It seemed to me that this story was not over. Yes, there is an epilogue. But that's because the author didn't know what to write next and rushed to publish the story.
Why is only Kim pregnant?
Abby seemed desperate to get pregnant. And she doesn't have a lot of time. She's already 35 at the beginning of the story. Her peers have kids that are graduating high school. Tina was 32, too.
I was loving this story up until the entire Kim & Beverly nonsense started. I could write pages about why I disliked it, but there really is no point. Thanks for all the fun stories.