All Comments on 'Yes, Sir Ch. 01: The Old Dog'

What a bloody brilliant piece of erotic fiction and i can't wait for more.

Brilliant start. Can’t wait to read more

Goodness that was hot and well written.

Off to a great intro

Great story. Loved reading about how hot they are for eachother, the dirty talk. Love the twist at the end.

That was awesome. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Hell yeah! Great stuff! Straight to favourites, and on to part 2.

This is a good story, but I've read it recently – likely at stories online??

WOW!

VERY hot/feverish story...! and he's hung like a mule...!?! and the 'Sir' powerplay

My first thought was...incredibly risky, and him seemingly having recovery time of an 18 yo, so they do it all night long...straight to nearest pharmacy-morning after pill...!

Can understand the very high rating...was what caught my eye,

and really interested in Ch 2, wondering where it goes next. easy 5, fave, and now wondering if you've got any other highly rated...pity if this ripped off, even more if you got ripped off