All Comments on 'Yes, Sir Ch. 03'

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 4 years ago
Nice Story

I like that he is using her but what of Luke. Maybe make him crave "humiliation"

and have him like sucking and Cream Pies. then he could turn them loose to find more for him. a Replacement for Violet. someone she really doesn't like would be a sure fire way to get it across that she is a "bimbo" to him.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 4 years ago
First, you don’t wash semen off with hot water

Any woman over 16 knows that. You use lukewarm water. Second, she wouldn’t wash her hair in the sink, it wouldn’t work and not in 17 minutes. Third, vaginas are like self-cleaning ovens but sperm doesn’t just leave a mess, it also sets off the ph balance and too much and a woman has a soupy mess in her jeans and a raging yeast infection and if you think that’s sexy, then you really need help.

Lastly, screaming in the room next to a class is NOT going to go well. First everyone knows what’s happening and second, imagine you’re the professor up for tenure and a rival brings up the fact you were boning a student during class hours. Title IX pretty much spells out the professor will be out on his or her ass.

You’re going to write a story about mind control then you’ll better actually plan what might go wrong and treating it like the 1950s isn’t the answer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
dont listen to the haters

While not perfect, its still an excellent story and im glad i read it. Keep it up

Brandon11Brandon11about 4 years ago
Revenge story

Love it

wellrestedwellrestedabout 4 years ago

wow - a very hot story, and not going quite where I expected it. Looking forward to where you take this next.

lujon2019lujon2019over 3 years ago

Ive never understood the "I'm so mad my GF is cheating on me I am going to punish her by watching her continue to have sex with people that arent me"

Make Luke fuck a cheese grater, and send the whore to fuck all the male halfs of Lukes relations

Subzero22Subzero22about 3 years ago
Some possible ideas

First off I want to say I liked the story so far. But if she is to be punished by fucking other guys I don’t think she should enjoy it. How can something you enjoy be considered a punishment?

Another idea is make her watch her now ex fuck other girls (possibly willing ones or better yet ones who are known and been caught cheering) maybe even her best friend or sister who knew and hid it from him and needs some punishing themselves

WeezyfWeezyfover 2 years ago

“Suddenly, I want to fuck MacCormick. This isn't about Conner anymore.“ where is the revenge? Torture? Nothing but pleasure for her? Its like she got reqarded lol

OpenWordsOpenWordsover 2 years ago

What a pile of trash. Jesus, what kind of cuck are you? Your fantasy is to bring pleasure to a cheating girlfriend?

ecto1d42ecto1d42about 2 months ago

Well first off that supposed friend needs to be a guest star at the local glory hole. And the girlfriend needs to watch him fuck all her family and friends and post that original video he has to porn sites. Or make her accuse the friend of rape. And give both a nasty VD

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