All Comments on 'Yin Prepares for the Party'

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JoeehartleyJoeehartleyalmost 4 years ago
Nice

5 stars. This is good. Love the BJ. More please

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 3 years ago
BJ cumin

A good description - try to relax more in your writing and then read it aloud to yourself - make corrections and 'go with the flow.' You will improve with time!

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Hi there, My name's Yin. I love writing stories about myself mainly, but just know that none of them are actually true and has not happened. The description in my stories of Yin is the same as myself. If you'd like to get into contact with me then please leave a comment or c...