- BDSM
- Yo, Adrian
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"As my fiancée, however, there are no such rules. You would be allowed to choose your own apparel, or none at all, as you see fit for the occasion. Do you understand?" Adrian was smart but what I'd just proposed was so far outside of her expectations, it took a few seconds to register.
"Babe, did you just ask me to marry you?"
"Well, it's not the sort of thing I could command you to do. It would sort of defeat the purpose."
"You're serious? This isn't a joke?"
"I'm very serious," I assured her. "Marry me and be my helpmate. I will still spank your titties and smack your ass when appropriate. I love you, Adrian. I think we should go to the next level."
"I will marry you," she said. "And I promise I will do everything in my power to make you the happiest man in the world."
As a rule, it irritates me when people make promises to do things that would require them to harness forces completely outside of their control. I think it's irresponsible. In this case, however, I overlooked Adrian's overzealousness.
"I believe you will," I told her as I placed the ring I bought on her finger. "I am confident you will be the wife better than any I could have imagined."
And she was.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI almost didn’t read this because I thought it was a gay BDSM story, here in the UK Adrian is a masculine name, the female variant is Adrienne.
There are a lot of BDSM elements in this story but I’m not actually convinced that it is BDSM? It’s obvious that initially the whole thing is a complete surprise but from his perspective he flat out confirms that he’s not interested in BDSM. He blatantly doesn’t care about her wants and needs or her welfare. They never have a sensible conversation about limits.
“I didn't have to please anyone…. / … She was here to serve me. I was beginning to see that there was a lot to like about this arrangement.”
“I didn't have to please her. I only had to please me. I did what I wanted.”
That said he developed feelings for her rapidly and he was giving her those oh so important orgasms that the vast majority of the adult population are interested in. Weirdly/ luckily she didn’t get pregnant despite unprotected sex, how irresponsible is it that he didn’t care? She had concerns when he explained the possibility of other men BUT they’re both students and you can’t really get worse timing than a pregnancy whilst at university but neither of them seemed concerned??
The bit about meeting her mother and her wanting to wear clothes was a typical dominant mind fuck and a cutesy way to propose. As fictional relationships go this one’s a bit hit and miss, If anything I think this falls into the Romance or maybe Exhibitionist/ Voyeur category because for him the BDSM is an afterthought even then, something he does for her not himself.
Overall it’s well written and his perspective is clearly understood. I read your bio and absolutely love your sense of humour!
Thanks for sharing Tess (uk)
