All Comments on 'You are My Eyes'

Very powerful - a testament to true love. Beautiful !

Wasn't going to bother reading it, it was so short.

But, for some reason, I did.

And then, I wasn't sure, as there wasn't much "story" other than the barest thread to connect the sex scenes. Not usually what I like. Sex scenes are good, but story is king with me.

Then the ending. Very fast, very brief, but it made me "feel" like sex-thread-short-stories rarely do.

Thank you.

Bloody brilliant. Melted my sappy old romantic heart. Not to mention hot. Really well written.

Very nice. I liked it.

Enjoyable story

This is a very good story and well written. I would love to see this continue.

This is an excellent story. You are a first-rate writer.

Dislikes first: I didn't care much for the anal stuff but that's just a matter of personal taste. At least you weren't so hideously graphic as some writers. As for likes, this is a pretty good story, Julie, with some nice insights into what it can be like for soldiers in the field and the appalling dangers they face. My sole quibble on that front is that the story could have been a little longer to examine the feelings and emotions of the girls following Beth's blinding. All in all, though, worth five stars.

Brian