All Comments on 'You Bet Your Ass'

What a great story about taking chances and getting fucked BIG time.

this was a good story, all the way until it wasn't. Such a good start, but then there were no details. Not a bad story, just a disappointing one

Great start then you dropped the ball no details & the quick ending

Not a lot of lead in and a real fast ending. Than being said I would like to see an other chapter.

there was good build up and a good start, but either you've never had anal sex, or you've only had not-good experiences, because the end is short, way too skimpy on the details, and totally unbelievable.

Go do your research (physical or digital) and have another go. You've potential.

...that much of a start, as far as I'm concerned. Negative all the way, diminishing to absolute nothingness.