All Comments on 'You Betcha! Ch. 01-02'

I gave it 5 stars. I liked the flow of the story. I liked the banter and dialogue between the characters. I liked the the way you kept the story light hearted and interesting. Off to the next installment. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Didn't work because there was no build-up and the sex was more bizarre than hot.

there are hundreds of stories on the net the only difference is the change of names. Betcha was a good laugh and had a touch of realism just enough to make it almost real. Well done it was good to read something about this virus that gave you a giggle

If you are going to use pop references, please get them right.

Cersei and Jaime were Lannisters, not Targaryens. So, Becca and Simon were getting together in "Very ... Lannisterian ways."

The Targaryen thing was that Jon Snow found out Daenerys was his aunt only AFTER they had been together. They didn't go into it knowing they were related by blood, unlike the Lannisters, who obviously knew they are brother and sister from the start.