by johngalt47
A MAN HAS YOUR WIFE AS HIS WHORE ,WHAT YOU EXPECT.LOOK DUMBY SANDRA IS THE ONE FOR YOU.YOUR WIFE RELATIONSHIP WITH HARRY HAS GONE ON TO LONG TO GET BY TOGETHER.
It's a pity, anon., you are missing SOOO much...
HELP FOR THE LOVE OF HELP ME MY CAPS LOCK OH GOD STUCK CAN"T STOP CAPS LOCK HELP ME LORD
The narrator checking out of wife's swain spare nights was a good touch. The three-some was too off hand for me to buy into. A little flirting would have set this up better. The author is rushing some things that need to be seasoned properly for a first tier story.
better do something in addition to getting revenge. Personally, I'd just skip the revenge and have her served on Fri night at her sister's. Needs to move to Macon and have a "come to Jesus" meeting with his daughter.
nothing wrong with a party girl at all. Just don't confuse her with wife material.
The main story just went of the rails… too many distractions all over! Noting to like about both deceitful characters!!!