by kingandrew
Well written and very enjoyable to read.. come back soon with another.
I hope he had a DNA test done. They fucked because they were both physically attracted to each other. About the same reason two dogs meeting in the park might fuck. Making it end up happily ever after is a fantasy. So this was about as romantic as some poor schlub betting all the mortgage money on a horse race, and winning. Too stupid and unbelievable to be entertaining. Keep trying.
Haha, of course it's stupid and unbelievable! It's porn!
I got off.
Please don't listen to the haters. I really liked it, and despite how they said it was unrealistic, I actually think it was highly possible - I have friends who fit both Julie and Josh's characters perfectly. The rhythm was great and the second scene on the plane was hot. Thank you for adding the pregnancy bit, it fits the 'unprotected' genre.