by Schaefferous
Yeah, you seem to have a knack at this. It was fun and well-told. I imagine some people might be a little offended that you cut off before the "good bit" or some might say it would have been more thrilling to bang in the office, but i liked the professional realism of moving it to a more appropriate setting. Five stars.
Well done. An erotic story that could actually happen and ended on the right note. letting the readers take it from there and imagine the rest in any way they want was masterfull.
That was fun to read. Many thanks, I want to read more from you now.
Axelotto
Absolutely freakin amazing story. Well written, no punctuation or syntax problems and likable characters to boot. Have this writer done anything else? I will certainly look forward to seeing something else from them.
Very fun and well written. A little more backstory about there normal relationship leading up to this would have given their reactions better framing. I also wish there had been a little more strain between them as they both suffer a few days thinking about what happen or might have happen. It still felt a little rushed but otherwise very good.
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Cheers
Great story , very true to life and well written. I had a similar affair with a work colleague, best 5 years of my life.
Keep up the good work
Fantastic story! Erotic, fun, realistic and above all, it leaves the action up to us.