All Comments on 'You Could Have Stayed'

Beautiul story of reconciliation. Very concisely told, yet leaving out nothing of value to the story. As for the "MG! CUCKOLD!" crowd? The fact they are so pissed off only shws how moving your writing is! 5 stars and favorited

So much communicated in so few words. 5 stars

I've read this one many times, and it never fails to move. Wonderful story, and the raac was well earned. I'm not a fan of cheaters, but this story seemed to come across as forgivable.

Second read... same 5 stars as before for an interesting way to get past a divorce to a reconciliation.

The repeated 'you could have stayed' changes from an accusations to an inducement to a vow.

Your talent as a writer is very evident in each and every story of yours I've read, and some more than once.

Very nicely done... still.

Of course it was his fault she cheated and planned and told the thousands of lies needed to keep it going for months.

He must have cheated also if things were that bad.

Decent reconciliation

Definitely one of the better reconciliation stories on this site. I don’t know if it would work had it been written as a day to day story. Part of the reason it works for me is that the characters had time for there to make changes. Perhaps individual epiphanies could have been added, but it is still a good story