All Comments on 'You Deserve This'

I’m stunned, absolutely stunned. What a complete and utter bastard, he’s a sorry excuse for a human being. It’s quite possibly one of the most depressing things I’ve ever read.

Without a shadow of a doubt it fails the descriptor of BDSM, he’s an abuser and not a Dom because no way is that kind of treatment Sane, probably not Safe either the given that the sick bastard will fuck anything with a pulse. Before the witty masses comment no I don’t mean the woman in the story. I don’t know if you plan on writing a follow up but I for one couldn’t stomach more of the same.

As a pice of writing it’s very well done, as depressing AF but well written.

Tess (UK)

That jerk is an asshole punk humiliation freak. He's Not good enough for you. He sees himself as a classy man who has the real deal on women who give him their bodies. Fact is, he takes what women give him. If they give him respect, he thinks he's the best thing ever. He's not worth the ground he walks on or the bed he sleeps on. You need to be taught self-respect and pride in yourself.

If this turns you on then I guess that's ok to write it. And I understand that some people are into humiliation. However if this really happened, it's disturbing and disgusting. If it's just your fantasy then you have as much right to it as anyone else. But if this is even loosely based on real life, you need to talk to someone about your self esteem and feeling, as well as safety. I hope you didn't go through this. There's enough body shaming in the world without inviting more from both yourself and a horrid narcissistic sex offender. (And this story should be categorised as non consentual btw)

If this turns you on then I guess that's ok to write it. And I understand that some people are into humiliation. However if this really happened, it's disturbing and disgusting. If it's just your fantasy then you have as much right to it as anyone else. But if this is even loosely based on real life, you need to talk to someone about your self esteem and feeling, as well as safety. I hope you didn't go through this. There's enough body shaming in the world without inviting more from both yourself and a horrid narcissistic sex offender. (And this story should be categorised as non consentual btw)

Great story. Wish you had written more, but I appreciate what is there.