All Comments on 'You Enchant Me'

nice read.. Promising start, please continue the story!

Could u make it a little longer?

Thank you!

That was hot. So far, I don't think you're in dire need of an editor... Unlike a lot of stories I've read on this site. This story CAN'T end here, I'm dying to see what happens.

On another note, I'm not sure how one volunteers to be an editor, and I'm not a professional, but I do get irritated with simple mistakes, that an author should catch by reading it after writing it. (was that a run on sentence??). So, feel free to reach out to me.

More plz:)

Except for the unnecessary language in the beginning, which probably came from being nervous, this was, most definitely, a good start! Please continue ASAP!

Very real. Would love to see more.

really awesome

In fact, a very good start. I've seen supposedly edited stories on this site which have been more badly written than this. I spotted one or two minor spelling errors which could just as easily have been typos---nothing to worry about. You show promise so keep at it.

I've read many edited stories that were much worse. You did a good job.

Great start. Looking forward to reading the rest.

SB