All Comments on 'You Forgot Something'

I liked the creative imagery within the story. “Her tattoos shown like glossed paintings.” The author has a way with such descriptive imagery that helps paint some vivid visuals with words. Not only using a good deal of words to paint the story, but also a large vocabulary of many dirty words. A good read.

Very good story, a solid read!

This went from hot to hotter in no time flat. The scene is smoothly set and the story wastes no time in bringing our characters together in a believable and endearing fashion. You can feel the passion in the writing, and the dialogue not only has a natural flow, it's easily digestible. What a treat! As always, this author has a way with words and this was a pleasurable read.

Fun read! The characters really did it for me, hit close to home. I, too, had a coworker that I was very interested in so this one felt pretty relatable. This goes out to all the cuties at work! Thanks for making the work day better!

Not sure if the other comments read the same story, but this was only a good read as a comedy. At several points I was pulled out by the author's lack of a solid POV. I really wish they would've stuck to a single POV, either his or hers, as it would've made this much easier to read. I also thought we were given details that meant nothing in a short one shot like this, and dialogue was unrealistic and sounded almost like how a robot would describe a sexual act. It was fun to read, but not really because I enjoyed the smut. :(

Great story, it kept getting hotter and hotter.

This story was hot but not in a make you want to jerk off kind of way. More of a make you want to call up your fuck buddy or significant other and make plans. Plants a seed of patient horniness.