All Comments on '"You Go First" Ch. 09'

This really turned me on. I've sucked a few Big Black Cocks in my day and I love them pumping their load down my throat and also fucking my man-pussy.

I also love it when "Donna" goes out on a "date" with his male gay lover. I'm "Cindy" and I too love going out on "dates" with men. It makes me feel so wonderful and special when a hot handsome man treats me like his woman.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I am soliciting ideas for a final chapter. Where should my characters end up?

Damn, now it's gotten deep and really really sad.

Since you're asking for ideas for the next chapter, I'd suggest that you make it at least a little happy. Mom gets off the hook with Jake. Don finds a girlfriend that loves a strap on. Or mom uses a strap on with Don and dad, while dressing both of them in lingerie, and Jake goes away.

The bit where Jake 'sold' Don's ass to Marlow and suggested it would be happening more disturbed me. A lot. Giving mom a cut of the deal was cruel as well. Don't like the way Jake is turning out. Fuck buddies is one thing, but manipulation and prostituting him is just bad.

Fun. Makes me hard. Sitting here naked at my computer, clamps hanging off my nipples, stroking myself, licking my precum from my fingers, while my unsuspecting wife sleeps, not knowing her husband is an old faggot whore who offers his mouth and ass to strange men....

Oops.... Carried away... Anyway, good story.

Damn I love this series.