All Comments on 'You Have to Pay the Piper'

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yowseryowseralmost 4 years ago

Splendid

Oh this one is a beauty! When the fetishes are as unorthodox as these, and you can make this kind of story out of them, it is worth all the sifting through literotica to find it. Absurd premise, hilarious characters, mixing money and desire and role-playing all together and getting a wonderful piece out of it.

'blackout blowjobs' and 'therapists' uttering 'better conceptualize the cock sucking' phrases. Excellent.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernalmost 4 years ago
Outside-the-Box Fun

Very hot and ultra-imaginative. I loved it. More please.

xoxo,

Di

DeanaBardDeanaBardalmost 4 years ago

Wonderfully Imaginative

Looking forward to more.

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

Hmmmm well thought out story, what a good “buddy” to help his friend and his wife. Bravo!

cuckoldmotleycuckoldmotley6 months ago

Thank God for a friend in need like Jase.

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