by Skippy47
But if he can't afford a place to live with room for his two kids it sounds like he's living paycheck to paycheck. Why let her off the hook? Why have anything to do with her? The ending really made no sense. Not one of your better offerings.
Decent and probably pretty close to real life. Hopefully he would find someone new in his life and only interacts with the ex when he has to. Let her life a lonely life full of regrets.
Good story until the end.
Don't stick your dick in crazy! Amber could baby trap him now and he'd be stuck paying 18 years of child support and put under immense pressure to get back together.
A better ending would've been Scotty moving on with a woman in her twenties, leaving Amber bitter, jealous, and heartbroken.
skippy? u drunk typing? hmm this was a third grade story. who ever this was should proof read or go back to school. really a confession at gun point the assault in his home, so bad.
_ _ This needs a rewrite and editing.
_ _ Better luck with the next effort.
These plots are always so damn weird but usually entertaining.
Thanks for the weird entertainment!
"if you really loved me, you would let me do this." - Sigh. If SHE really loved HIM, she wouldn't even WANT to do it, let alone ask.
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SHE deserves it? So does that mean the he deserves a lover also?
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Good for him for using her as a FWB, as long as he doesn't let it go any further.
wear a condom and no kissing or oral. Who knows where she has been. You can't trust her and no way will she go from so curious and horny that she risked her marriage to now being celibate like a nun.
Decent story but it lacked depth as to what they were going through during/after the divorce. The narrative in the epilogue was a little "choppy" at points and left the reader without a complete feeling of closure. 4* at best...
God you write terrible stories; terrible grammar, terrible plot, terrible characters.
Yeah he'll crawl right back and will soon be eating another dudes cum from her hole.
If nothing else, thank you for giving us something other than a cuck story or an I love to watch my wife get fucked by black guys.
Keep up the good work.
Scotty confessed all of his illegal actions inthe letter... thats even dumber than what the lover did. A flaw in the storyline
1 star because even though it is not a complete RAAC story, Scotty renewing a sexual relationship is still a reconciliation on a level other than being civil for the good of the children.
I've never known a woman who pulled the "It's just sex." talk on a husband and I hope that I never do. Most ave enough sense not to try, which I regret does not mean they won't cheat. She was delusional and paid the price. Interesting story. Thanks for sharing.
I liked this a lot. She turned herself into a slut and he got to us her as a slut. 5*
Up to the last bit, was a decent variation on a well worn theme.
But how this guy could have a FWB relationship with this idiot just did not make any sense. At all.
One thing for future reference: a person passing himself off (i.e., impersonating) as a police officer has committed a felony. The retired officer surely would have known better, same with the sheriff.
This could have been a readable story, but the plot development and dialogue are horrendous.
I loved it right up until the end of the story. The revenge plot was great, and the letter to Amber was solid. But the “dehydration “ thing just wasn’t needed. Even with that, I gave it a *4. Thanks for another good story.
Nice try but honestly its a "we need to talk" by the numbers.
Really nothing new, with the same stereotypical over the top, tone deaf wife as 14,000 other "We need to talk" stories.
I have an ex-wife the only way I would fuck her would be with a shotgun.
the only truth is found in actions.
They will be remarried eventually, or he will find a better woman. It doesn't really matter which. They will talk, promise, and really mean it. Doesn't matter. She's a ticking bomb, and he will deserve living in doubt and uncertainty if he doesn't replace her. So what, if that's what they both want.
The whole husband is dead pain theatrics was juvenile. Maybe someday she will pay him back. Who cares?
Thanks for the effort.
Then last sentence — “(I just came in my pants. Sorry.)” Had me spit my imaginary coffee all over the imaginary keyboard.
Thanks. I needed that.
... type of stories sound alike. We read one and many writers copy the idea and make it theirs. I will give you * for this one...
Why destroy a great, well written, beautifully plotted and executed, if rather formula beginning, story with a lame ending.
You missed the last few sentences of the letter mate;
"Then I had this detailed confession of my assault on Tim at gunpoint, written in my own handwriting, delivered directly to you. I also outlined my intention to blackmail you to change the outcome of a legal proceeding in my favor. Either gives you leverage to have me imprisoned should I use the tape for any reason. Disregard previous demands, I am going to destroy the tape now.
Your Husband,
Scotty FUCKING RETARD, Esq. "
Seriously. Couldn't have made it a phone call??
Ruined it with the ending! Took a proud, decent man and turned him into a wimp! He should have just started cleaning up her lovers cum after they were done. How could any respectable man stick his dick back into a cheating whore?
Good story, poor ending. How can he have sex with her, he wasn’t enough for her before why would he be enough now. Ditch the bitch and move on.
What the fuck does "It's just sex" even mean? If that excuses cheating, then all cheating becomes okay, because you can't cheat without sex.
She really showed her nature first with the affair and then by leaving her husband on the floor. It's hard to believe she would ever come to regret her actions in any way other than her selfish well being. Still, it is an interesting story and told well.
This story would have been better, if the ending didn’t involve them having sex.
I liked the whole story and especially the ending. Now they are friends with benefits whenever the urge strikes either one of them. To me this is just a modification of what the wife wanted in the first place. Common law marriage - with the ability to date others if and when they choose - without committing adultery.
The only difference being now it is all out in the open and will not hurt the children as much as a long nasty divorce. That would have included financial hardship and a possible endless line of 'uncles' showing up for one night stands.
More stories like this please.
I "love" how in these wife wants to take a lover stories, the wife always claims how much she LOVES her husband, but will rape him in the divorce if he tries to leave her! If she truly loved him, but just HAD to do this, she would give him a fair divorce.
Fucking ruined it with the ending! Letting the kids live with a cheating cunt shows no love for his kids. Having sex with the whore just lets her off the hook for trashing the marriage. She deserves to be alone, shunned by her children, and HIV positive.
Scotty should have stayed "dead" and taken the kids with him. Let her rot in her misery.
Yeah, the confession in the letter made no sense. And no way I would have sex with her, no telling where she'd been slinging her cheating snatch.
Silly plot, but creative. The writing switches from third person to first person at times, and some grammar errors diminish the product. Overall, a solid three stars.
Damn
Was a great tale until the end. I wouldn' fuck for all the money in the world, no matter what. Do better next time.
The reason I scored the story so low wasn't because I didn't enjoy it but because you did not FTDS!!
YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING??? The Bear does Not approve. Only 2 stars ,because the guy gets his ashes hauled periodically, but hat dangerous. Don't let the little head do the thinking. RUN, DAMMIT, RUN!!!
The BEAR
sbrooks103x
"I "love" how in these wife wants to take a lover stories, the wife always claims how much she LOVES her husband, but will rape him in the divorce if he tries to leave her! If she truly loved him, but just HAD to do this, she would give him a fair divorce."
Why would you think that is what the wives would do?
The ending ruins the entire story. Moved it into the " not worth rating " category. I guess I just have a go with 1 star.
When he says he doesn't want to 'risk his horniness pushing me into a bad marriage', does that mean he wasn't having sex with the women that he was bringing over to their parties? Is Amber really the only woman he can be intimate with? Dude is in for a bad time if that's the case. Guess love really is blind (and dumb).
Poor. The writer was stuck for an ending and allowed the hub to lose the moral high ground by stooping low enough to use her for personal relief and to play her along to do so. Makes him no better than the guy who was chasing her.
1 star, & I'm being generous. His "brother in law"'s a sheriff who helped Scotty with his false death? Thought he was Scott's brother. And the whole dying thing was over the top. In the end, he returned to Amber for sex as needed; WHY would he even think of her, no matter how sexy to him she is, after all she did? No, the story that started out good just faded out fast & was ruined by the above. Again, 1 star. -- Bob
M'kay this ended up being a`less than worthless cuck story, and truly a dumb one at that.
Secondly with statements like this "You would be surprised how many of the women friends we have that have a lover on the side and their marriages are doing fine." that make the idiots amongst the readership think this is a legitimate issue. it isn't but some people who read these are too stupid to breath without someone reminding them to do it.
Cute and clever story. Well written with proper grammar and all that stuff. I've never written a story here or elsewhere, and I try to be constructive. However I've noticed others without a written story just seem to mostly say what petty things are wrong. Don't let those pissants bug you. Apparently they don't have the talent for writing or the bravery it takes to be judged by amatures in the public eye. Good job. R. Bachman
Good story until they went to have sex after that Christmas get together. Why would he want to do that? Earlier on, a missed opportunity as Amber said she worked hard for family, etc. Scott never picked up on that & said he worked as hard for the family as she did. Perhaps he can get a woman on the side. The depicting Scott as was also a bit too much, but loved that Amber received some hell from the family. Surprisingly, her parents weren't involved.
The story was overall good, but the above, especially with Scott having sex with his ex after all the hurt, hurt the story. I'ma gonna try to forget that part. 2**
A “fair” divorce? What is fair about her issuing an ultimatum, cheating, leaving him unconscious in a hallway, but still get the house, the kids, and presumably child support and alimony, all while he gets a hovel where he can’t keep the kids for more than a couple days a month. Is that the new definition of fair?
3 Stars from a Man who ate Tuna and peanut butter a lot . But at least I can hold my head up . He gave her 2 kids but never married her . So then the ex wants me back like that is going to happen . Not NO But Hell No
This is dumb. He wrote out his plan admitting to aggravated assault and roped his BIL into his criminal conduct. He made his divorce situation worse
You turned a fair story into a loser when you had them reunite. Terrible ending...hated it!
Whatever with the FWB ending. But wow her internal thoughts when presented with the (fake) news of her husband's death is just damning No mourning. No deep regret. No despair. Just worried about having more tasks to do. About finances. What her kids will think. What questions people will ask. About her bring a bad Samaritan, etc. Only late does she express sadness. Wtf?
Woah there just because he doesn't understand how things in the grown up world work, ie: laws, how adults communicate, or proper verbiage of the English language, you shouldn't crap all over him. I mean I think some of his stories are pretty dam good for a 12 year old.
The fact she kept trying to call Tim was another nail. Narcissist character, very well represented.
Wouldn't trust her with a FWB situation though - another baby risk and she can hook for child support
She's a right proper mercenary.
I liked it. The ending was just right. Four stars from me,. Looking is the definition of four stars.
JPB
These idiot wives just never learn until they lose everything and are humiliated in the worst way. Evidently it takes a lot to break through that thick layer of self-entitlement and delusion they're ensconced in. Well best of luck to them. I don't know how anyone could take back someone after that level of betrayal and disrespect, especially after that hotel room incident.
Another soft cock endings no BTB or revenge just capitulation
Last story of yours I will read
I've in my 50 years on this planet have kicked at least a dozen doors and of those only one didn't explode flying open (cell doors being steel and having steel frames) accounted for that one. I'm 5'11" 220 so larger than average but by no means a "big" guy, and can only bow my head in shame for how pathetic and weak "men" have become, both physically and mentally. Not only have they lost mental and physical strength, but they also have little to no male virtues anymore either. Honor, valor, courage, and self-respect the pillars of male virtue are rarely present anymore in men, and those rare times it's only one maybe two and they are pretty flimsy, my generation not all men had all four maybe not even most men did, but enough did, enough to make my generation (gen X) famous for our courage, our valor, our honor, and yes most definitely our self-respect.
There's probably no downside to turning cheating ex to FWB. Or maybe P(erson)WB.