All Comments on 'You Love Me To Hate You Ch. 02'

Great story so far.

I didn't feel as connected to the characters this time.

Rick and his lying slut maybe needed their own section. She might have had a drunken slip but what the hell was she doing? She isn't a stupid kid?

She then just decided not to let her husband know she fucked a kid young enough to be her son?

I wish there was more to explain.

I am terrified for Todd and pregnant Gwen.

Thanks for the good read.

Great chapter!

5

Nice story. Alter is to change altar is the correct spelling. You have weddings coming up so this will help.

Great story! Keep it coming!

Cheers

SAGE

I like this story and can’t wait to see where it goes.. but I was totally disappointed in Gwen!! First she drinks while pregnant.. then I believe she would have cheated on Todd! After everything!! I didn’t like her so much after that.. and I am surprised she didn’t tell Todd.. but probably because she knew he would end things.. but I can’t wait to read more!

Keel it up great job.

Love the story so far, I eager to hear the rest.

Had to add the cliff hanger didn’t you? Great character development, I really enjoyed the way you added tension into it with subtlety. This has been a good tale and has been very entertaining. Nice job, well done and thanks for sharing your work. Really looking forward to chapter 3! 5 from me for sure.

JJ1

That dad better get some pussy from some other lady before he gets back together with his cheating slut wife.

So here we have Sheila cheating and being forgiven and continuing to live with Rick, while Gwen grabs the stripper's cock, is stopped not of her own volition and still gets married to Todd.

I liked Part 1 but dislike this one.

like the story when will the next chapters be coming?

Wow some readers are harsh. Yeah Mia was a slut. Sheila got drunk and had a one night slip in a car with the asshole. Sure for many that is a deal breaker. Different folks, different strokes. Looks like Sheila and Rick will make it but was a near thing. Difference is Sheila undeniably felt like shit and was remorseful about it and confessed about it to Rick. Mia was a lying repeat offender with no booze involved. Don't even get started on Gwen at the Bachelorette party. We know from other stories by the same author that Cara is a major slut, for manynyeard when younger. Gwen was seriously intoxicated to thr point she did not feel well. Yeah she fucked up and would have the stroked the strippers cock and probably popped it into her mouth. Fortunately Izzy stepped in and saved her. If you think all three of these women are equivalent in the magnitude of their betrayals then you are way off base.

Wow some readers are harsh. Yeah Mia was a slut. Sheila got drunk and had a one night slip in a car with the asshole. Sure for many that is a deal breaker. Different folks, different strokes. Looks like Sheila and Rick will make it but was a near thing. Difference is Sheila undeniably felt like shit and was remorseful about it and confessed about it to Rick. Mia was a lying repeat offender with no booze involved. Don't even get started on Gwen at the Bachelorette party. We know from other stories by the same author that Cara is a major slut, for manynyeard when younger. Gwen was seriously intoxicated to thr point she did not feel well. Yeah she fucked up and would have the stroked the strippers cock and probably popped it into her mouth. Fortunately Izzy stepped in and saved her. If you think all three of these women are equivalent in the magnitude of their betrayals then you are way off base.

Nice cliffhanger for the ending ...