All Comments on 'You Naughty Boy Ch. 02'

mom knows

Omg absolutely fucking wonderful, my girl friend and I creamed our brains out acting this story out. Cunt laping sex maniac Lanc's UK

Like the way Natasha and jake fit together . Only problem i see is that Jake is going to be heart broken when Natasha leaves to go to New York .Thanks . Hope the next chapter comes soon .

The story starts out as cousins. In this one you tagged it brother/sister. Though the story isn't bad.

mom knew it was going to happen

I love this one a lot, I am also an amature erotic writer and the way you bring things together is wonderful.... I can not wait until the next chapter....

Your story is faboulus .... where the hell is part 3?

please finish the story soon.

Yes, please continue this story. I want to know what his surprise is.

That is THE naughtiest cliff hanger I have ever read lol hands down. great chapter and story so far.

continue story

I suppose we will never know what the surprise was or how this relationship developed. Gotta hate that, like a book with he last page missing.

Who is Sue that he was dreaming about?