All Comments on 'You. Owe. Me. Ch. 06'

Liked the story well written and flowed nicely but did not like the infatuation you seem to have with pot

I loved the whole series, but teh chapters were a little short and you need to make an ending to it.

I really hope there is more coming because i really love it!! and would hate to see it end this way!!

can you please... write your conclusion i love your writing!! and i dont think anyone else finishing it can do your writing and story justice! btw

Awesome series. Finish it!

Terrific story. Love it. I would love to read the ending.

People say end it, I say keep it going.

WHY THE FUCK DIDN'T YOU FINISH THIS STORY? THIS, BY FAR, IS THE MOST INTENSE SHIT I'VE EVER READ TO ONLY FIND OUT THAT IT ISN'T FINISHED. DAMN. FUCK. SHIT!!!

I agree you need to come back and finish this!!

I've never commented or said anything but this story is amazing and I might just go crazy if I don't hear an eding

Even though it's been almost eight years, I implore the author, if they're still active here, to finish this story. Even if it's just a quick, half-assed wrap-up, any resolution is better than none at all.

This was one of the hottest stories I have ever read it the history of my literotica readings but I will never read anything from this FUCKED UP author again. This unfinished story made me loose all respect for the author and literotica for allowing it to be left unfinished.

There's going to be more, I hope.

People like to really fuck these stories up by getting others involved. They have enough problems to look forward to with others. Whether there's more or not whether they get together again I will not know I will not be watching for it or read. It makes me sick.

Hey uh bro. It may have been 10 years, I think. But can we have a continuation please? Lol.

Loved the story but the amount of sex was not necessary. More of the back story would of filled in some of the blanks 8EB3

Because it's been 11 years since an update. Such a shame for such a great story to end without a conclusion.

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You start to ramble on putting in filler to stretch the story. A good story but be more concise.

Don't tell me it's gone off..... This is not how this ends. More Please

I was hoping for so much more in the Ending ... I liked most of the Story but the Ending I hated ..

No more? The story doesnt have any closure..

You have me sucked in . I have to read more. Left me with so many questions.dont let it end like that

Please finish this.

Great story! Well written!! Know it's been quite some time, but really hoping you get around to finishing this...

The end of chapter 6 ruined the story for me and dropped it from 4 star to a single star. If it were possible to give it a lower grade I would. It's pretty obvious that you won't fix your story with a 7th chapter so I'm done reading your junk.

How can an author bring a story along so good and then leave the reader hanging. It is so wrong not to finish this story. This was a 5 star story until this end leaving the reader hanging. 3 stars

Laura contains a surprise for both herself and her brother. She will discover she is pregnant. That will motivate her to reconcile with him but she will demand some pretty inflexible ground rules.

What the hell, that's it??

Don't like the way it ended. I thought they made a perfect couple and I loved him been together.

Unfortunately, we need writers in the erotic side of adult relationships who finish the work. It's been so long but you have to wonder what happened to the author... I like the details of life the person included. Another writer could read this story and bridge in missing pieces plus finish it. This one deserves a proper conclusion. Heck, it could carry on in several more chapters.

Well, I DO see there is a conclusion chapter to this...and I am off to read it!!

Before I do, tho'...I still love this story, the emotion and love between Laura and Chris is palpable...now we will see how they can handle a little intrusion by the bitch Rebecca...she really let both her "friends"have it with that little comment.

Becky led Chris on...her comment about 'sex for the joy of sex' or whatever...we could see the duplicity of her mind even as we read it...and while she was gonna bang Simon...

**5** Stars...again, I love the story...hope the 'conclusion' is going to be satisfactory, and NOT disappointing...

MADDOGINTEXAS, what conclusion? I see nothing after chapter 6, the lack of ending dropped it from 4 or 5, down to 1 or 2.

Fuck. Ended worse than a case of blueballs.....

Very unsatisfying ending. I see this part was written in 2006 so no chance of a true ending after all this time. It's sad that this is happening all too often here. I have read several series only to come to the last page of the last submission to find a cliff hanger that then never gets resolved. Maybe it would be better for authors to hold their work and submit it when completed? It would save a lot of reader frustration.