All Comments on 'You. Owe. Me. Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
a great read

a great read very well written ........ but u will finish it or i'll call u names lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Best....

Cliffhanger...Ever. Its 3:30a.m. here, im supposed to be up for class in about 4 1/2 hours. I wont be sleeping cuz i'll be obsessing over how this will end. Jerk... =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW!!!!

A great story. Leave us with a cliff-hanger ending? I can't wait for the next chapter. You should write in the contests. Keep up the great work.

rj228212rj228212over 15 years agoAuthor
From the author

Jesus Christ. I don't think there are enough ways in the human language to apologize for my absence. But I'll try: I'm sorry!

I admit, I'd lost track of this story for a long time. Honestly, today was the first time I've been to this site in a long, loooong while. Life has been - how shall we say - busy. But seeing these comments has brought a weight of guilt upon me heavier than my fat uncle. And trust me, that's hea-vee.

Thank you everyone for the interest in this story and I hope I haven't squandered it. Rest assured, Chris and Laura are coming back to you. Maybe it will be the ending, maybe it won't. I can't say for sure. And I can't say when. But I am working on it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
CLIFFHANGER?

Oh, come ON, man! This is probably one of the best series on literotica right now, not to mention some of the best writing I've ever read in my entire life! Don't just leave us with a cliffhanger forever! Finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
YOU BETTER FINISH

Wouldn't you know it. I find a story I love, I spend all day thinking at work WHAT HAPPENS NEXT and the story ends on a cliffhanger. (sigh) YOU BETTER FINISH IT.

P.S. Love the series keep on writing.

nojstrebornojstreborabout 16 years ago
Closure

I need some.

Please finish the story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Finish IT!

Come on! you have to finish this story! It has come this far already you cant stop til its finished!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great stroy, where is the ending?!?!

I loved this story series but it can't end like this, what happens, do they make up or break up, do they get over this set back and come out with their relationship or is it over. it needs a better ending than this and we are all waiting for it. i hope its a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
When's the ending coming?

This is a great series. Very well written and convincing, when is the ending coming. It can't end like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HOLY CRAP!

this is amazing, finsh! and finish soon! happy ending, please?!?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please Finish

I didn't look at dates before I clicked to post a comment, so I'm not sure how long it's been since you've added on to the story, but please! please! finish it!

The characters are great, the sex is hot, and while I'm pulling for a foursome, I really just want Chris and Laura happy, in love, and fucking their brains out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Omgz! Soo good!

I love your story!! please update! are chris and laura going to be ok?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yep, he blew it

It's been awhile since this story was updated. Maybe it doesn't have a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW

please do the next one? it's so romantic as well. I want to know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
INCREDIBLE TO SAY THE LEAST!!!!!

WOW AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please finish it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story. It is different then the stories I usually read. Please complete the story when you can, to leave it unfinished would be a shame.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Amazing

My girlfriend and I found your story looking for a little spice in our sex lives. Your story was easily the best I found on here. It surpassed the usual dirty words, it was sensual, and interesting. It painted a beautiful erotic story, whose characters I actually cared for.

Keep up the good work, and you owe it to yourself and all your fans to atleast eventually release further volumes :)

nineliveswastednineliveswastedalmost 17 years ago
awesome

Short and very nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
W H Y?!?

Dont do this dude! where's the rest?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
GREAT!!!!

That's not fair. Where is the end of the story? Hope it will be soon. Please. Pretty please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW

Absolutely amazing. Please finish soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ITS ABOUT TIME

been waiting for status on this story for a couple months now. welcome back. love the story line. whats happening neeeext :) hope we find out sooner than later

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
love it

Can't wait for more chapters to come. It's a great one.

ethereal_dancerethereal_dancerover 17 years ago
class a addiction!

Beautiful mate! i'm truly addicted! you're probably sick of hearing it, but please please please please pleeeeeaaasee write more. can't wait.

peace out x

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
please

Why dude couldnt you finish it huh? just leave people hnging dont you!!! finish pur-lease.Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
just un fair

too hot to handle but we all need this ending!!! I need to see these two end up together!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ditto.

dude. ditto to everybody else's posts. make more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The End? No Way!

The End? No Way! There has to be a chapter 07 or so. This is a very well written, entertaining love story that deserves a 'happy ending' conclusion to it. And, like the others, I don't want to wait forever for it. Please write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT!!!!

MAKE MORE!!! DAMNIT!! COME ON DUDE!!! THATS SOOO LAME!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! AND HURRY :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MORE!

OMG...come on and give us more....im dieing here...how could you do this to us!

more more more, and you better not wait another year to post again

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great work

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's soon.

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 17 years ago
MORE--NOW!

So glad to see you back at this story, but PLEASE get us the next chapter. Everyone wants to know how this is going to play out now. It is a wonderful love story so PLEASE hurry with the next installment, hopefully wrap it all up with a long chapter.Now, quit reading my drivel and GET WRITIN'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More please

Excellent story exceptionally well written.Please continue with this story, like a lot of readers i want to know what happens.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow..

I am so glad to see this back. Honestly I thought it would never be. Please continue it! This is truly a great story and I have to know what happens!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good to see you back!

Hope you come out with more chapters soon. I've missed this story for quite a while, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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