by rj228212
a great read very well written ........ but u will finish it or i'll call u names lol
Cliffhanger...Ever. Its 3:30a.m. here, im supposed to be up for class in about 4 1/2 hours. I wont be sleeping cuz i'll be obsessing over how this will end. Jerk... =D
A great story. Leave us with a cliff-hanger ending? I can't wait for the next chapter. You should write in the contests. Keep up the great work.
Jesus Christ. I don't think there are enough ways in the human language to apologize for my absence. But I'll try: I'm sorry!
I admit, I'd lost track of this story for a long time. Honestly, today was the first time I've been to this site in a long, loooong while. Life has been - how shall we say - busy. But seeing these comments has brought a weight of guilt upon me heavier than my fat uncle. And trust me, that's hea-vee.
Thank you everyone for the interest in this story and I hope I haven't squandered it. Rest assured, Chris and Laura are coming back to you. Maybe it will be the ending, maybe it won't. I can't say for sure. And I can't say when. But I am working on it.
Oh, come ON, man! This is probably one of the best series on literotica right now, not to mention some of the best writing I've ever read in my entire life! Don't just leave us with a cliffhanger forever! Finish it!
Wouldn't you know it. I find a story I love, I spend all day thinking at work WHAT HAPPENS NEXT and the story ends on a cliffhanger. (sigh) YOU BETTER FINISH IT.
P.S. Love the series keep on writing.
Come on! you have to finish this story! It has come this far already you cant stop til its finished!
I loved this story series but it can't end like this, what happens, do they make up or break up, do they get over this set back and come out with their relationship or is it over. it needs a better ending than this and we are all waiting for it. i hope its a happy ending.
This is a great series. Very well written and convincing, when is the ending coming. It can't end like this.
this is amazing, finsh! and finish soon! happy ending, please?!?!
I didn't look at dates before I clicked to post a comment, so I'm not sure how long it's been since you've added on to the story, but please! please! finish it!
The characters are great, the sex is hot, and while I'm pulling for a foursome, I really just want Chris and Laura happy, in love, and fucking their brains out!
I love your story!! please update! are chris and laura going to be ok?!
It's been awhile since this story was updated. Maybe it doesn't have a happy ending.
please do the next one? it's so romantic as well. I want to know what happens next!
WOW AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please finish it
This is a great story. It is different then the stories I usually read. Please complete the story when you can, to leave it unfinished would be a shame.
My girlfriend and I found your story looking for a little spice in our sex lives. Your story was easily the best I found on here. It surpassed the usual dirty words, it was sensual, and interesting. It painted a beautiful erotic story, whose characters I actually cared for.
Keep up the good work, and you owe it to yourself and all your fans to atleast eventually release further volumes :)
That's not fair. Where is the end of the story? Hope it will be soon. Please. Pretty please!!!
been waiting for status on this story for a couple months now. welcome back. love the story line. whats happening neeeext :) hope we find out sooner than later
Beautiful mate! i'm truly addicted! you're probably sick of hearing it, but please please please please pleeeeeaaasee write more. can't wait.
peace out x
Why dude couldnt you finish it huh? just leave people hnging dont you!!! finish pur-lease.Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please. :)
too hot to handle but we all need this ending!!! I need to see these two end up together!!!
The End? No Way! There has to be a chapter 07 or so. This is a very well written, entertaining love story that deserves a 'happy ending' conclusion to it. And, like the others, I don't want to wait forever for it. Please write!
MAKE MORE!!! DAMNIT!! COME ON DUDE!!! THATS SOOO LAME!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! AND HURRY :-D
OMG...come on and give us more....im dieing here...how could you do this to us!
more more more, and you better not wait another year to post again
So glad to see you back at this story, but PLEASE get us the next chapter. Everyone wants to know how this is going to play out now. It is a wonderful love story so PLEASE hurry with the next installment, hopefully wrap it all up with a long chapter.Now, quit reading my drivel and GET WRITIN'.
Excellent story exceptionally well written.Please continue with this story, like a lot of readers i want to know what happens.
I am so glad to see this back. Honestly I thought it would never be. Please continue it! This is truly a great story and I have to know what happens!!!
Hope you come out with more chapters soon. I've missed this story for quite a while, and I can't wait to see what happens next.