All Comments on 'You Say You're Looking For Someone'

What a fun story! Thanks for sharing it.

NIce, but what was that last bit? 5 stars anyway!

Witty and nicely written.

The last line alone merits five stars.

I do appreciate a good grammar slap!

5* of course.

Another well written sweet story! Thank you and please keep them coming :)

Good plot.

Still Grinning. Great one. I like the last bit - your and you're are some of the most frequent mistakes on this site. Along with Site and Sight, Waste and Waist, They're and Their and There. and on and on and on.

Five thumbs up.

Ha. Great last line.

Nice! Neat, clever and sharply written.

It was well written and different enough to be fun. Nice job.

Ha, last line is great. Up to your usual standards.

Yeah buddy... 5*s

You haven't lost your sense of humor! What is troping along?

5

You left me with just enough to be satisfied, and, conversely, not enough and wanting more. Perfect! This is the first story I've read written by you. I was just going through the Valentines contest entries, one-by-one, yours was next. I was very happy to have read this! You did very well! I could have said, "You done good", but I'm a grammar snob also; my mother was a teacher, her voice lives in my head, "Child! Employ proper grammar! English is complex, embrace the complexity!" A nod to the last line of your story.

You done good!!

lol that joke at the end made it worth the read

Great story premise.

Fun read. Thanks for sharing.

... but you're joke at the end really had me in stitches. Thanks!

cute!

Good story like the twist, pandemonium ends his stories with a joke.

"Am I the laughing stock of your little click?". Nope, that makes no sense, the word you wanted is "clique", a small group of people, with shared interests or other features in common, who spend time together and do not readily allow others to join them.

Pretty decent story, though.

Fun story!

While the story was excellent, the five star was partly for your joke at the end. Been there, done that…

Loved the joke at the end but M&M made a mistake of his own in this story by using 'click' instead of 'clique'.

Great story with a very clever idea. Good joke as well. BardnotBard