All Comments on 'You there, Butch?'

*sigh*

I really liked it and think you could probably build a few chapters around a these characters. I will keep an eye out just in case you do.

Great story PF! Excellent as always :)

She’s real, she’s gutsy and she makes a great story. *****

That's actually a compliment when I was a soldier many years ago. Wowsers!!

Do please consider where this could go!!

Bravo,

Paul

Hope u add more chapters to this amazing story. Police officers need to fall in love too.

I hope you continue this story and could spin others with the background people. Definite 5 stars

I took a risk on this story, and it was worth it, most enjoyable! Thank you!

Not quite sure it’s Romance, though.

I think it was better than the comments. The story has three hooks: the stolen auto, the breakfast guy. and the false alarms. Good plot, good dialogue, good characters, good interior thoughts, a beautiful woman who didn't know it,

a good dress, a great hairstyle, a good meal, great and slow seduction, and good sex. The fundamental question for the future is can a jeweler and a cop make a go of it into the future?

Liked it a lot, thanks

You really need to read about Chekhov's Gun. If it's worth telling to the writer, it should be worth reading to the reader. Case in point: thirteen year old girl and her brother? Boyfriend? have a brush with the law. We see her struggle, get caught, plead for a little empathy, and... nothing? Really? Why all the detail if you're not going to use it?

I read a bunch of your stories, and between interesting characters that are introduced and never mentioned again, and the infuriatingly suggestive last sentences, I really can't award you more than three or four stars for being so careless about your plotlines. Take that as a compliment: I want you to finish your stories as they're pretty enjoyable to read. But don't give me a setup and then be silent about it - that's just plain mean.