All Comments on 'Young Blood'

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DunkirkDunkirkabout 5 years ago

Why take any bc or morning after pill. She should day fuck it all and then hope she shows a well formed baby bump

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Believable

What a bloody good story . Absolutely believable . Loved it thanks .

Gaffer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great

Great tale, hope she goes out for more cock. Very well written, very good pace, I hope it is your confession!

maddictmaddictabout 3 years ago

Bloody hell I've been here before, still exciting. Stop and have a cuppa with Mom next time

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good core story. Nice exciting ride. Needs editing and proofreading. Too many spelling and grammatical mistakes to get full marks from me. It's a distraction.

The woman's perspective is the right one for this story. Am curious about what else you have written. Will search that next. Keep writing!

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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.

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