by PaulaApril
Good core story. Nice exciting ride. Needs editing and proofreading. Too many spelling and grammatical mistakes to get full marks from me. It's a distraction.
The woman's perspective is the right one for this story. Am curious about what else you have written. Will search that next. Keep writing!
22
Bloody hell I've been here before, still exciting. Stop and have a cuppa with Mom next time
Great tale, hope she goes out for more cock. Very well written, very good pace, I hope it is your confession!
What a bloody good story . Absolutely believable . Loved it thanks .
Gaffer
Why take any bc or morning after pill. She should day fuck it all and then hope she shows a well formed baby bump