All Comments on 'Young Ebony Waitress Ch. 01'

She isn't at all reluctant.

I really like it, the older guy/younger girl is such a unique dynamic when submission is involved. You took your time to develop both characters and I look forward to what comes next. Well done.

Yummm!

Alina gets pregnant................

Story took a bit of a twist, I will eventually get around to a part 4

I'm really enjoying the series, its very well written with the possible exception of the adjective "young" being repeated ad nauseam, it gives the the impression that author thinks we won't remember Alina's youth if we're not reminded in every description of her.

Appreciate the feedback, I must admit I do tend to over use certain words. I haven’t published anything for a while but I am still writing. I hope to get back the Ebony Waitress story, just been stuck trying to a sequel to another series and it’s proving to be quite hard and exhausting.