All Comments on 'Young Girl's Gradual Foray Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Play on your strength

Better to leave incest thing and concentrate more on public exposure. You are good in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More details needed.

Little details will add more fun to the story. Areola big or small? Nipples hard? Did brother got horny looking? How was he feeling seeing her? What exactly he saw? Did he went to his room and wank?

The story don’t have to become an incest one. But make the exhibition more fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nicely done!

Great series. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Like both the exhibitionism and incest. Thanks for writing these.

sapna_prakashsapna_prakashover 5 years ago
Gone Awry!

From a promising exhibitionist story, this has gone down the drain into incest. Wonder why Indian writers gravitate towards incest so much. Change track my friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
spicy turn

This is a spicy turn... waiting for more detailed plot in this direction ...

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