All Comments on 'Young Girl's Gradual Foray Ch. 05'

Good story, but need some more details.

How can we visualise Nisha if even the colour of the panties is not mentioned?

How Irfan took care of himself? What was he imagining?

Get Irfan involved as well. Probably he will take a photo or something? He has some close friends to give him a digital camera for that?

It's a nice continuation ... expecting a bit more detailed and eloborate plot ...

Once you start a story, especially a good story like this, please keep writing.

This story has the potential to be one of the all time great Indian sex stories!

The characters and the story line is so great. Especially how the background is clearly built makes the story very interesting.

Do not rush. Make it a novel. Describe the sex related scenes more. And write often!

Your writings are fabulous Bhai. You know the real fantasies of people about incest relationship and most about mom and son I love your deep seduction writings.l really appreciate your love towards moms. I request you to please write the another seduction story or very seductive story of seducing innocent mom through massaging and then spiritual thinking and world's reality of giving pleasure to home members by real physical love then getting dirty and hard fucking and chilling moments at the end. Bro i have great trust on you ..you can only write these type of great seduction stories. Use saree petticoat pantyline visibility and deep seductive thoughts.

Just improve your story by real home stories between close relationships innocent mom and seducing son in india.

Or brother seducing elder sister. People loves this type of stories..even if they don't tell directly but they shag to the thick very thick white cum .when they heard these incest relationship between family members.

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