All Comments on 'Young House Wife Ch. 03'

A bit slow, needs to be a bit faster & continuity a bit earlier

I love this part of the story, and love the slow build up. What would be perfect is if you continue to build up to the suspense, each time the actual act happens.

The downside to this approach is I have to wait a long while to read the next part!

it was a good continuation of the story. however, it appeared a bit unrealistic as compared to the earlier chapters.

please keep the next versions quickly, while trying to be more in tune with the actual expected events.

Fantastic. Could not stop from reading all the chapters. Please continue.

I totally loved it!! The build up was amazing... Once during the story I felt that you were just gonna make any story that you please (when breast sucking was getting involved) but then you got back & made the story right!

This was really good... as were all the others before this... Keep writing!

HA HA HA HA HA HA

What happened to Chapter 2 and 4?

Never read a worser story than this. Pathetic. I lost my erection reading this

Please Post part-2 of the story

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