by dockcocker
I was 14 years old when I was seduced by an much older woman. Today, I'm an old man and that was the best sex I've ever had.
My experience didn't happen until I was 34 and she was 50. But it rocked my world!
You write decent dialog, create vivid and vibrant characters, develop a respectable plot line, but of the three stories you've submitted, none are more than slightly more than a single page in length. Just when your audience is getting invested in what you've written, the story is over.
I'd like to see a submission at least twice as long as this one, or even possibly three times as long. A nice 3 page story would allow you enough time to really tell a complete tale, instead of these teasers you've given us so far.
Great story. Here is my older woman experience. I was 22 at the time. She was 39 and divorced. We worked in the same place at the time and one time she just asked me over to her place for dinner. Well it went from there. It was great. Since then I have been with only older women and much prefer them.
Great story -- and the best part was the three little words: "To be continued". . . Soon, I hope.
This is a realistic situation. Many young guys are attracted to older women, more women should recognize the interest. It can really work out well.
Hi I have to say that I am enjoying your stories and this one certainly has great potential, as well as a very good storyline please continue.
Like the male respondents, I had relations with older women. Few women may respond because few women read or write stories. Having two women in the story and suggesting a threesome can be detrimental to women. Women may want to read the love story between him and her. She will see herself as the loved woman. Going slow so she feels comfortable with his advances helps her feel he will be a great lover. Good luck in the series and I hope women writers will read this and explore their writting expressions regarding sexual desires.