All Comments on 'Young Mans Reward'

Not bad but didn’t need it three times!

Your story appears three times, two copies on page 1 and another copy on page 2.

Why do you repeat the story

I thought I was having deja vu all over again.

I enjoyed the story, it shows some potential if you want to become a storyteller.

There is one big problem.

You have repeated the story twice more after your initial telling. The entire story is in this document three (3) times.

Good luck, keep writing

Sorry about that, don't know what happened...