All Comments on 'Young Wife Fucks Another Man'

Was a good story until the name calling, denigrating the husband, etc. That shit is not needed in a story. It could have been a 5. Instead it is a 2.

Negative feedback noted and appreciated. I will definitely take it into account, thanks all.

notice that you have 4*s on your story despite these guys who have no idea what they are talking about giving you criticism. do not take there feedback into account, they are the vocal MINORITY. most of your readers think its a 4* story. my wife loves to be called a slut when we are having sex but then that all stops after we are done. we laugh, have a great day and its no big deal at all. you very minor few who are butthurt about it are out of touch with reality or single. the name calling is fine and actually quite normal. and any guy is gonna ask "am i better then him" if hes plowing a guys wife. everything here is really believable given the circumstances.

Nice illicit sex story. The slut stuff is fine in principle (this site does not and should not reflect real life), but the way it is handled here detracts from rather enhances the story, I feel. Perhaps it would be more effective and less cliched if they talked dirty in a more adult way?

Brilliant story in all respects. The name calling can be a turn on for some. I liked Neil’s confidence.

An educated guess, that this apparently male nickname "Jimmy_the_Saint1", belongs to a lady. And this is going on for many others. What's really the point ? Just to reinforce the ridiculous idea that men like to be submitted and cuckolded ? Really ?

It was super hot...as a little dicked bi submissive I luv the name calling and having her forced to admit how much better his big cock is. Got me hard.

Needs proof reading.

Loved it

very good!!!!!!!!!!!!