All Comments on 'Young Wolves Ch. 06'

Your story is the first Non - Human I've ever read this long (I've only read to short ones before). I've always enjoyed a werewolf tale better than a vampires. But please don't take this tale to long to finish before it gets boring. If it does get a little long make sure to put it down on the screen while it's still fresh in your mind.

"Sirreadsalot10. " Keep rocking you rock big time that if this could be made into a movie by a good director, it would cause a lot of attention - all high.

You just got yourself a fan all the way from Nigeria. Don't disappoint!

I have to agree with the first comment entirely (other than I am in Florida). I have yet (up until your story), to find a continious story I wished to read. You have taken it beyond what I normally have read in Literotica before. Being a big fan of movies, with the first several stories in Young Wolves, I envisioned a Megan Fox type as Jennifer (probably because of 'Jennifer's Body'). With bits of a couple of werewolf movies thrown in (most noteably Blood and Chocolate and New Moon). Now it seems vampires as well.

Besides all of the 'monster' elements, there is basically a good story as backbone. Without that, this would be nothing but trash. Please continue, as I (and I am sure others) are waiting with the pleasure that a good story brings.

I was really enjoying this, interested to see where it goes, up until the last page. And then you went all special little snowflake on us. Why oh why does every protagonist have to be a chosen one, or be unique in some way, or have the vampire blood react differently to them in particular, or, or...

The Alpha of Alphas? Man I hate prophecies.

Don't get me wrong, I'll still read and enjoy it, I just wanted to rant.

i'm loving this story line and have totally been pulled into reading it. i like some of the plot development (not sure about the prophecy bit but its a cute touch), but would like to see it balanced with action in each chapter. i love the main character's ability to lead and command. as alpha of alphas perhaps he can incorporate tyler into his pack and help/force him to improve his ways.

-keep it up

I think the length of the story is good. I personally dislike reading 1page stories. Don't stop writing =)

This was fantabulous!!! jimminy crickets this was a great chapter!!

Your story is amazing! I can't wait for the next part!

I really have enjoyed this story and I am definitely looking forward to the next installment.

great story screw word count so far i thing the story reads perfix

looking forward to next chapter

....daughters in law baby! Post 3 at once will ya? I'm NOT kidding!

will be waiting for the next ones to appear

back to my own pack of wolves now :)

As one author to another I have worried about the same. Usually fans complain about length, but you are the writer and know when a good place to stop is. In the next chapter of Connor Thomas I asked my fans if they want quick and short or long and slow? Because as every writer knows the muse is not always on your doorstep.I think this chapter was good and I see now how you said Roderin and Tyler's plans were similar. Looking forward to see where you take this.

Never worry about length. Just worry about quality and story. Everything else will just fall in to place :)

Keep up this excellent series to a good conclusion :)

dude

this chapter was great. the last one had too much sex n killed the story. this ones really good. go at a good pace n incldue sex as needed. dont just have sex only

When the hell are you going to make this into a full blown book. Kind Sir, this is fucking awesome. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the new chapter. I really enjoyed the scene with Allen and Trish. It was very sweet.

I'm glad Cameron's mom is taking it well. I'm interested to see how Cameron's sister is going to adjust and handle of this, considering what was implied in this chapter. I hope she'll be OK. But honestly I'm looking forward to a scene with her too.

Now I know Cam can kick Tylers ass if he is the chosen one. Maybe he can bring desruction to Tyler and salvation to his pack at the same time LOL. Gotta love it when the good guy kicks the snot out of the baddies. Looks like we might get some vampire action later too. Sweet!!!

This story is one of the few that I have read more than once. While I love to read; too many are out there to take that kind of time. Yours deserves it. 5 stars are not enough! 22 stars planets too.

I just atarted reading your work this is a very good story, it does not matter to me about how long the chapters are, I am just enjoying the story. Please Keep-up the good work. I will be looking forward to more stories and more fun reading.

i will say it again.. DAMN! this is an AWESOME read. It would be a VERY VERY good story even without the sex, but with it.. it is truly GREAT.

PLEASE keep on writing..

and, oh yeah when is the next chapter of OUTLANDER coming?

i'm waiting, but patience is NOT one of my strong suits!

Thank you for your work, it is truly a pleasure to read!

RaVVen71

Never question yourself with your writing abilities, I have read and reread your stories and they are out of this world. I have many many many favs and you are one of the top five on my list....

Keep writing and have fun with it, that is what had made you one of the best.

Thank you

You now have my full attention. How are you going to play this. haha

I am loving this story line, can't wait to read more but unfortunately unlike werewolves I need more sleep than they do ^_^ lol.

...lol i just got goose bumps from the end of this one....anticipation i guess

just gets better and better

love the stories like these where no nobodies become the greatest

This story is actually really good, like even removing the sex side this story is really good. Probably the best wolf story I've read (not just adult)

Loving the story.

The plot thickens!

Interestingly the story doesn't mention Cameron asking if there was another way to free Camille.

love the last part