All Comments on 'Your Love'

There is a very prevelent petern in Stang's stories that is a representation of the worst male delusion imaginable. All the women seem to cheat with mediocre men. This is so far removed from the true hypergamous feminine baser instinct that it is hard to even call the women in his stories actual real women. Make this more believable at least by having them cheat with a guy that has something going for them the husband does not. Instead reconciling the women on these stories with actual typical women of any calibre moral or degenerate attractive or not us just impossible. This story would have been perfect if John had something going for him over Wayne that would justify the cheating wife being swayed or charmed. Even prostitutes and the most promiscuous women have to find something that a lover possesses that enchants them (even if temporarily) to cheat. Even if this is a delusion either the the wife has or being projected by the lover. Instead the prevailing wives' Paramores have nothing that could even entice the most promiscuous whores. This par of his stories is laughable and is a blemish an otherwise exceptional writer's competence.

Poor Wayne, married into a family where the parent almost killed him and thought it was ok to forgive two years of adultery, an elder sister who cheated on him for years... And would have gone back to it once the urge came back, and a little sister who used actual drugs to force him and could actually spend years in prison because of a deranged plot that includes kidnapping, sexual assault and extortion.

5 stars

Loved it!!! You had me literally LOL!!!! Actually this was a re-read for me! Great fun and a delightful plot!

No way they last. 19-year old with a crush having a baby. By the time she’s 23 she’ll have regretted all of this.

“I had to give Alyssa credit though. She saw what she wanted and she took. The worst thing about it was that she took it all from me. She took my husband. She took my house. She took my life.”

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Alyssa didn’t take anything. Josie threw it all away.

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4 ****

Thanks for yet another really fun read!!! Love that great imagination you have!

Umm not sure he won out in the end. Yes Josie was a cheating harlot, but Alyssa drugged and raped him, trapped him with a pregnancy, and authored the fake kidnapping plot. That isn't love. That is obsession. He was better off leaving everyone behind. Not a viable romance

So he ended up with someone who kept his wife’s cheating a secret for over a year-who knows what she could have brought home to him- so she could make a ridiculous kidnapping plan, then drugged him, and got pregnant from it.

Not sure that’s a trade up.

Yhankyou a Really great Story.

I loved the story, and a perfect capstone on the end to round out the theme. Well played!

5 Stars on a great story . I would have called the guy a coward and dared him to shoot my ex wife .

One of the messages of this story seems to be that it is not only ok but the right thing to do to drug an intended partner and take advantage sexually because when the intended partner feels his or her cock or pussy the drugged up victim will love it and everyone will live happily ever after.

One of the messages of this story seems to be that it is not only ok but the right thing to do to drug an intended partner and take advantage sexually because when the intended partner feels his or her cock or pussy the drugged up victim will love it and everyone will live happily ever after.

For those saying thus guy isn't a cuck what the fuck do you call it? He's fucking pathetic he's about as anti male as you can get and still have a Penis. Typical IT Nerd my only question is why any 19 year old hottie would want a pathetic wimp who seemingly has zero masculine qualities whatsoever?

Why would she and John have to pay Wayne twenty one thousand dollars?.He never sent the money.Just a usual cock up from this author and his editor.

That girl scares me bad!!!!!

Fiction.

This is rare , you didn't make the man cuck like you usually do .

A rare W for MattMoreauStar06

I usually like SS06, but this was horrible. Flip the sexes, and think about how the story would be received?!?

It’s okay to rape someone because they don’t jump on you immediately after you prove that their spouse is cheating?

It’s okay to baby trap a man because you want him?

Okay, maybe she’ll be faithful. Yes, she’s younger and better looking. He should still run his shitty antelope ass as fast as possible, otherwise she’ll be controlling him for the rest of his life.

A nice cage is still a cage!!!

ZK

Good story as always, just a little disconcerting when you mixed up Wayne & John’s names in a few paragraphs in the Jamaica scenes. But a fun fantasy. 5

5 Stars on a Great Story to read . I had a Girl half my age following Me around for about 3 months .. Then I had a Family reunion and she ended up with My Nephew . They named their first Kid after Me .They named the second after My Dad . Sadly he was not their for that as He has passed on .

5 stars for another dumb broad story. Why can't we all get raped by a sexy 19 year old? Because it's just a story dummy! Although I did hook up with 19 year old little sexy thing a hundred years ago. Only lasted 13 years. Oh well. Just remember the divorce is the screwing you get for the screwing you got.

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So, the guys in her office sexually harassed the process server? That's been frowned upon since like the 1980's.

The lion/tiger/cheetah references were creative and very good.

Cracking story. Always love SS one liners.

5 Stars on this one for sure .. I think that Stang has the highest average of any writers here . Plus he drives Mustangs

Good read. A little convoluted, but enjoyable nonetheless.

5 stars!

Bill

That is one fucked up family.

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When first we practice to become such a stupid cunt

Excellent, as always. Will Joise ever learn? Her sister didn't take her man away from her, she threw him away first and the sister picked him up.

With a 2X4 no less!!!

But i noticed some idiot saying, "Cheating is still cheating, even when drugged....bla bla bla"

Just stfu moral oral. WHEN one party voids a contract, the other party is under NO obligation to honor that contract. I know this concept is very hard for some. Even a sacred wedding vow is a contract. It's NOT a one-sided promise, it does NOT exist in a vacuum. They are called sacred wedding vow((S)). Two parties promise EACH OTHER these things. It is a contract. And even if the court system turned into a money making useless lump, that tolerates broken contracts and endorses cheating, the moral reality is that NOBODY honors a broken contract.

If I agree to pay you 100 bucks for an AC unit that works, and either one of us fucks up. (It doesn't work, or I only pay you 50 for a working AC unit) In either scenario, one person BROKE the contract. The wronged party isn't beholden to uphold their end of the deal, at all!! Same goes for fidelity both physically and emotionally. If ANY spouse beats their wife or husband with objects, NO one is going to say, "It's still wrong to look for another partner." But for some dumb fuck reason, one that no one can coherently present me, cheating gets a pass. I think too many people are SIMPs. Just weak and lonely sad sacks that give free passes for serial cheaters because they are morally barren. If Josie slipped up, I can understand TRYING to salvage a broken contract. But she calculated it all, and felt she deserved to break her contract over and over again. There is NOTHING worth salvaging. Annulment is a possible avenue, that's how broken Josie's views are.

name confusion during kidnapping scene. Otherwise usual high standard

I got to the end of Page One I was pretty sure I knew how this was going play out, but I knew I was going to love Alyssa. From the first fuck to the signs of pregnancy was a tad bit quick but hey it held the story together, so let's call it poetic license. Around a 45 minute flight from Midway or O'hare over the lake to somewhere in Michigan would end up around Ann Arbor, assuming the Lower P. Enjoyed the hell out of the story. Signed: BTW

But still better than most of the rest posted here. I still liked it. I sure wish he was writing again.

Cheating is cheating. He screwed Alyssa even when he was not drugged. I know Stang Star does not write here anymore but I just had to say it.

Re reading old stories and realized I never voted on this one. Had to give it a 1. Not because it's formulaic, you expect that from SS06, but because rape is rape is rape.

Don't give a fuck if it's male or female, the sister date raped him. She is just as fucked in the head as the older sister is. She even timed her rape to coincide with her fertile time, because the protagonist wasn't the type to live her a single mom.

Don't believe me? Have the roles gender swapped and watch the fires burn as the younger brother date rapes the wife. People would have torches and pitchforks out faster than the mob after Frankenstein's monster.

I am a big follower of StangStar06. I've read every story he has posted here and on SOL when they were first published -- given a day or two. This story, "Your Love," was published in October 2015, but I didn't see or read it until November 2017! I do feel really dumb.

So, Stang, all typos are here fore forgiven!

BTW, this one got a 5.

This thing about Mustang being a man's second best love after the wife must take a break. After the wife the sister-in-law holds the title coz she's a fearsome cheetah!

he could not remember who was Wayne and who was John....

I liked it. But the weird names (Don Alduck, Mick Emouse, et al) gets a bit ridiculous after a while. Still a great story though. I give it 5 stars.

If it was real life Wayne is a very lucky man! Jodie fucked away her marriage

It was what Alyssa did that makes him lucky!

I wish I had a beautiful woman do what she did for Wayne! Lucky Bastard!

OK NOW THE COMMENTS SOME ARE NORMAL THEY LOVE A GOOD STORY WHEN THEY READ IT!

BUT FUCK ME MAN! SOME ARE DOWN RIGHT BORDERING ON CRIMINAL INSANITY

ANYWAY THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FANTASTIC STORY WITH US!

LOVE YOU ALL! BYE GREG!

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

theres no way matt moreau/cuckstar06 wrote this ...the man had BALLS and left his whore to be with a decent woman .

tell the truth , who really wrote this ?

In all of your stories you make up inconceivable legal situations for the sake of plot devices... they are married for six years and he gets the house... and everything... she also has to pay him back "ransom" money which was legally half hers... I'm assuming you're basing these ridiculous rulings on the fact that she cheated... not only would that not matter to a judge... but the judge would be more inclined to nail his ass to the wall for knocking up her 19 year old sister... you just make up legal rulings as they suit you...

-jaye-

at various times and positions up is down and vice versa, TK U MLJ LV NV

Both sisters were fucking psycho. Frying pan into the fire.

Whom does he choose, the whorish cunt or the psycopathic cunt? Decisions, decisions. LOL!

Entertaining tale

So the husband cheated with the younger sister while his wife cheated with her boss. The younger sister initially raped him by using a cocktail made up of date-rape drugs and viagra. As wimpy and powerless as the husband is though, all she had to do was expose her breasts and demand sex - he would've done it. I hate male characters who are powerless to resist a woman simply because she has big boobs - I guess the only reason he hadn't cheated on his wife already was because he'd never been seduced before, otherwise he would've caved automatically. What a wimp.

This story was a five star story because of 'Don Alduck, Mick Emouse and El Merfudd'. That alone made it a worthwhile read.

Thanks for a very entertaining story.

Not sure how I've never seen this, but I am reading it now. Outfield also had a hit with "Say It Isn't So". Actually a better fit for a cheater story. If this is a repeat of other comments it's cuz I haven't read any further than the foreword.

Saxon Hart

Future butterball sociopath vs. HOT immature psycopath. Quite a dilemma

I thought it was another Five Star effort, as I've come to expect from you. Pay no mind to the naysayers. They are reading free stories on "Lit", for goodness sake. If they want classics let them go over to the library and pickup something by James Fenimore Cooper, or some such. That ought to give them a thrill!

The husband in this story was as stupid as the readers who thought this was a good story.

Wayne traded the cheating slut for the psycho rapist...

Yeah, that's got all the making of a loving, healty relationship...

Great story as always....You are one of my top three authors here in Lit.....A lot of the comments here are really dumb....this is not exactly Random House with professional editors getting ready for a major publication AND fiction is just that..... fiction! ..... which can be anything the author wants it to be. Other than a few extra commas,,,,, the editing was good except; At the beginning of the story she didn't want Wayne to take her to the airport...she drove and only had 20 minutes to get to the plane when she parked......Then when she flew home she was hoping that Wayne would pick her up, but her father did and when he took her home to get her things her car magically appeared in her garage for her sister to drive to the parents house. Keep them coming Stang.....BTW in my opinion you could write professionally!

You write a good story and then fuck it up by getting the names wrong. I've said it before, if it is because you change it after editing, why have an editor in the first place ? If it's the editor get a new one, if it's you then stop fucking around with it.

What could be a good little story is ruined by your fuck ups.

Good read

Especially glad to hear a Halloween story is coming.

My request is to see some of your characters from your other stories!!!

Thank you for continuing to write!!!

A good read for a light whimsical tale. Looking forward to your All Hallow's Eve tale! ~leftend86

The Outfield, eh? Well Played. So what happens when she finds a Flock of Seagulls in iTunes?

The drugging aspect was odd, given how it was seen as no big deal.

I've read and reread this story and it gets better every time. I enjoy the character development and the flow. The only issue I have is that damn song has been stuck in my head for days. Keep up the good work

Wimp moron tale

I blame your wife for making me buy that Corrs song a few years ago but she didnt get me this time! Seriously though, it was a very nice and funny story.

I love reading your stories and I full agree with what someone else said....the length of your stories makes them fulfilling.

StangStar06,

I eagerly anticipate your posts and appreciate all the effort you put into your writing. Don’t let anybody discourage you from their length. That’s what separates your offerings from the two page Wham-Bam-Thank-You Mam’s.

Great story and an easy read.

easy 5*

for effort and content

no comment , could only stomach 2 pages

1 star

worked a lot better with vodka.

thank you

So I won't

Lately it's been crazy and crazier with your stuff. Are you shooting for craziest? ( you won't get there I remember the aliens) Lets try writing something REALISTIC for a change. Also ... you need to be more careful with your editing. This one was very sloppy you even had a quick change of perspective mid paragraph at one point and that's a big no no. Not remotely close to your best but still way better then 98% of the other stuff that gets dumped in LW.

Again the narrative gets the characters' names mixed up.

Check the hotel scene with the kidnappers.

What is it with these wives who have loving, caring husbands, but crave some occasional rough sex?

They never even ASK their husbands for it, just because they don't BELIEVE they would ever do it, but isn't better to at least ASK before cheating?

It's not so much to leave the other guy alone, it's that the betrayal is the WIFE'S!

Unless he drugs and/or rapes her, the other guy can't do anything if the wife remains faithful.

glad i read this story as it shows how good a writer you are. love reading your stories as they show all sides of the people in them. keep on writing

I have been hoping that you would start writing good stories again, but I had almost given up hope. Your stories in 2010, 11, 12 and 13 were very good. Then you got on your Stupid Wife thing and they went to hell. I mean really, one or two wouldn't have been so bad but everything you wrote in the last 2 years had to have the dumbest bunch of wives ever. And the worst part of that is that over half the story is the dumb wife and we have to try and read through it. It had gotten to the point where I just skipped all of their sections. It was just to stupid to read. Go back to the good stuff like Back On The Block, Chrissie or Burning The Witches. All very good stories. This one was good but could have been better if we didn't have to read how dumb his wife was in her own words and thank God for the Smart Sister. You did better in the past, you can do it again. Those old ones were great reads.

... Wayne might've been a little on the wimpy side but definitely thought the sisters were two of your most well developed characters lately.

For sugna... Like a mulligan in golf, the second girlfriends are always perfect and never stray from the straight and narrow. Think about it, what kind of stories would we have if otherwise?

Not up to your usual standards Stang-man. One ☆.

And I thought cheetahs never win.

Personally I don't see that he came out of it any better he divorced a crazy woman only to get drugged and raped by another only to get stuck with her

...and in about half the pages. It was less repetitive and also didn't feature boring minutiae about his process of washing and waxing his car for hours every day. I enjoyed the dynamic between the sisters, and liked the Alyssa character except for one detail - the DRUGGING and RAPING of her brother in law. That was so unneeded and made her seem evil. Even putting aside the rape aspect, those drugs are dangerous and she put him at serious risk by using them. I really wish that hadn't been a part of an otherwise very enjoyable story.

Cog

Great story. As for the guy finding someone better well, sometimes good things happen to people who get crapped on, it's called karma. I can live with both the cheating slut and the asshole getting to live, as long as they get to live really shitty lives. The husband getting a great woman and kids while getting great revenge, even if a lot of it was due to assholes ex and Alyssa, is what makes this a great story as opposed to just a good one.

Most of your characters, if not all, get a consolation woman equal too or better than the one they lost to infidelity. (We can't really be sure they are better, because we all know they are just one "Loving Wives" entry away from turning into big cock, sex crazed sociopaths bent on destruction.) Unfortunately, this is not the most common outcome for most men that actually loved their evil wives and are heartbroken by their cheating. No, if that is the case, they usually turn to destruction of one kind or another. Guys that did not really give a fuck about their wives look at her cheating as an opportunity to get out of a shitty marriage. Most often, they are no great shakes themselves. So much for going from loving husband to banging the 19 year old sister in law.

Josie is an unrepentant bitch and got exactly what she deserved, nothing. Her unrelenting stupidity and arrogance does get a little tiring but that's what self centered people are like. I can't really believe her father suggested the reason for Josie's cheating was because Wayne wasn't getting the job done in the bedroom; anything to protect his little princess from the responsibility of her own actions.

But would any man really want live his life with a woman like Alyssa? She's crazy.

Almost la grand guignol,hysterical. One of Stand funnier works,worth the read

He dumps a cheating whore so that he can marry a woma n he knows raped him, who just happens to be the cheating whores sister and is fucking slash raping a married man herself. . Alyssa is the fucking grossest second chance woman ever, what the hell? In reality, Wayne would have gotten jack shit in the divorce because he would have lied and claimed the impr e gnatio was consensual, and a sex video pales in the face of knocking up your wife's baby sister.

What idiot marries into his ex whores family anyway, and much less to A woman who ytried to murder her own father with a 2x4?

Have admired your work for the last couple of years and you and a select few others like JPB inspired me to put finger to keyboard and see what I could do. A story is a conspiracy between the writer and the reader and you are one of my favourite conspirators. It's not about the ingredients, it's about the spell that you cast. Have a happy Halloween!

Will she get her own mustang....or a mom mobile ?

Stang Star...although, not much about the wheels this time.

Thanks for the light humor.

Totally lacking emotion too. Cardboard characters.

Another very good one by Stangstar, and the same day another favorite of mine has one, JPB. Thanks guys!

. . . is sure coming up in the world! Finally.